[ ficlet ] Soundless [ TWEWY/Loveless Fusion ]

Jul 24, 2009 14:56

Title: Soundless
Author: frostberryjam
Rating: PG/PG-13 for… mental sex/swearing.
Summary: TWEWY/Loveless fusion AU. Neku and Joshua have been a pair since childhood. They know each other well by now -- but that doesn’t mean the relationship runs smoothly.
Author Notes: I’m having a pretty awful day, and the smut muse has been overworked, so I figured it was ( Read more... )

type: ficlet, what the fudge was i thinking, rated: pg-13, loveless, the world ends with you

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azalee_calypso July 24 2009, 19:20:28 UTC
This is what you call a drabble ? Holy cow. Now I think I get why half your ideas turn into multichapters. XD
I adored the whole touching hands/connecting names scene. I bet you're so surprised. HAND FETISH FTW. Meaning I of course liked the opening scene quite a lot as well, but especially for the

“… can there be a day I wake up without the sexual harassment?”

thing. Oh Neku. I love that he's so used to Josh, so casual even though Josh still annoys the hell out of him.
and yes i did go all "YES PLIZ" at the date-at-the-aquarium suggestion.

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frostberryjam July 24 2009, 19:36:01 UTC
Well, by this point it turned into a ficlet... but yeah. Lawl? Originally they were two drabbles, meant to be read one after the other, and the second one ended at "As I belong to you". Then I just said 'eff it', put them together and wrote the whole hand-sex thing. *points at previous conversation* Trying to give people something to enjoy despite the 'huh?' factor and all that.

lawl. Hand fetish for the win indeed. Fingers for me. Mmmn. And the inside of the wrist, and the inside of the elbow, and -- no, Josh, I'm NOT writing a vampire AU, get the eff away from me -- of course the neck ~ but I'm getting off topic.

Glad you liked it. xD The smut muse is still comatose, but it felt good to write something un-smutty (... yet still there's sex?) again.

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frostberryjam July 24 2009, 22:12:51 UTC
Basically Joshua's trying to wait until Neku's ready to lose his ears willingly to him, as opposed to being seduced or otherwise convinced against his will to give them up. Didn't get chance to really expand on that since I wanted to keep this from turning into a monster.

Just imagine Joshua has a room full of sex manuals that he's been studying for reference.

In other words... they're not lovers yet.

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frostberryjam July 24 2009, 22:25:15 UTC
I'm... trying to refrain from continuing it, although I admit it has possibilities. ( Sota and Nao-Nao; Thoughtless? And you know Neku and Ritsuka would have woes to discuss about their partners) Need to finish other multi-chapters first. ^^;

Glad you enjoyed it though. :D

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frostberryjam July 24 2009, 22:47:26 UTC
Yum, yum! Cookie. Munch.

You know they'd sit down to have a coffee and divulge (in harassed tones) of waking up to find Soubi/Joshua in their beds staring at them and playing with their ears and making suggestive comments about how they'll miss them when they're [the ears] gone.

.... note to self; write that scene sometime.

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shipmateee July 24 2009, 22:38:31 UTC
I VOTE AQUARIUM :D

Stop playing to mine and Lee's hand fetishes, or I may end up forgetting about the mewling I enjoy so much >:D
Neku, I love you. Then, again, when do I not? :3
I am so honestly surprised Joshua has held back so long D: Where is the speedy seductive Josh we all love so much? :DDD

Heyheyhey, guess what? I just got onto Week Two in the game. Like, literally just. I've been playing Week One all day just to get to Two. I ended up so damn excited for Josh that I couldn't even sympathise with Neku when he woke up at the scramble again. I was all "OH BOO HOO, WHINE, WHINE. WHATEVER. YOU HAVE TO DO IT AGAIN. NO ONE CARES. NOW HURRY UP AND GO OVER TO THAT STRANGER." I was so giddy. You have no idea. It feels so much like I'm cheating, though, because I kind of already know everything D: OH WELL, TOO BAD, SO SAD :DDD

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frostberryjam July 24 2009, 22:45:22 UTC
Well, you gotta remember that in this fic Josh and Neku actually ARE just 15 year old boys. This is the time when those hormones are actually going to start kicking in like crazy and Neku won't be so much of the 'must-resist' and then there's the whole thing about society pressuring them to KEEP their ears, and so on.

I pander because I love. ;D I almost snuck in some mewling in there, but Joshua's tongue had other ideas.

AWESOME. ;D *throws confetti* I bet it must be kind of weird knowing everything even though you're only playing for the first time. *shakes head* I need to get off my lazy ass and play again, except if I play = I don't write. Fail.

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shipmateee July 25 2009, 00:48:13 UTC
I FEEL LIKE SUCH A CHEATER FACE.
It's like "Oh, Joshua, you sneaky little bastard. I see what you're doing there. I SEE IT. D:<"

. . . That sounded marginally pervy. And voyeuristic.

D:

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frostberryjam July 25 2009, 00:54:56 UTC
... you say that as if there was something wrong with that.

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chainey_clink July 25 2009, 16:21:00 UTC
Oh, nice name for them. (Are there really slash lovers who don't know about Loveless? :o)

He reached across the space to catch Neku’s hand, spreading the fingers open like the unfurling of flower petals.

Best. Line. Ever. Glad you've done a crossover fic with Loveless; you write it very well.

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frostberryjam July 26 2009, 12:28:10 UTC
It was hard to figure out a name that wasn't cliche but still somehow tied into them both. I brainstormed with a couple of people and the results were not attractive. (Lifeless? Toneless? Ick.)

Glad you liked it. That line came out of nowhere, but I'm happy to have kept it in.

I think there might be a few? The Loveless fandom seems to have really dropped down lately instead of building up. I suppose there are other things people are focusing on. Hi, Hetalia!

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