fic: mission accomplished, kh2

[pedosaurus]

Title: Mission Accomplished
Author: Meganmonster, llama_sama
Pairing [Fandom]: Axel & Roxas [Kingdom Hearts]
Rating: PG/PG-13, because my not-really Axel-muse happens to be violent.
Word Count: 1,379
Summary: And so he thinks and thinks and thinks until his head hurts and his blood boils, and he needs to go find some Heartless to take his aggravation out on.

Comments

[kame_pie]

>: I loved it. ♥

[pedosaurus]

Hooray!! ♥

[crossoverqueen]

This is going on my memories. Excellent work with Axel's violent tendencies; as cliched as it is, I felt like I was actually in the story because I have have a temper as bad as Axel's.

Most people think having a bad temper just makes you "fiery" or "hotheaded" or "some other pun on fire/heat," but they skip over the physically/emotionally destructive nature and how the slightest things can set someone off.

[pedosaurus]

Sounds like I did a good job with this one! Like I said to someone else, this was my first time really writing Axel, and trying to delve into his psyche, y'know? I've written smut more times than I can count, but it's a bit more difficult to really let a character's personality shine through in that sort of setting.

Anyway, I'm glad you liked it!

[pedosaurus]

This was my first time writing Axel, like, seriously. Because you can't really know how well you're writing them if you're just writing sex, haha. XD

Glad you liked it! :]]

[joyless_euphora]

This sounds like a very possible and characteristically accurate depiction of how it happened, and how Axel must've "felt". I like how you only used 'it's too late' as opposed to the entire dialogue. I think when authors use the entire dialogue, it takes away from the morale. We've all played the game.

-Nodnod.- I liked it a lot.

[pedosaurus]

I agree. I just used that line to kind of remind people that the ending isn't going to be ZOMG WUT A TWIST!!1 and super fluffy cute.

And thank you very much! <3

[vaguu]

^.^ Ooh, me likes. Even if there was no secks. :D

[pedosaurus]

I'm glad! :D Now I want to write angsty secks. ;;

[vaguu]

Ooh~ Angsty secks is always the best kind. :O You should get Axel to rape Roxas, even though he still wants it. XD

[pedosaurus]

OH, HOW YOU TEMPT ME! WATCH ME END UP WRITING IT LATER IF I DON'T FORGET.