Title: Chapter Thirteen: Service Fee
Pairing: Matthew/Dominic
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Morning brings melancholy and a big mistake.
Disclaimer: I do not own Muse. The events within are entirely fictional.
Betas: The dynamic duo
millionstar and
dolce_piccante . You both are made of beauty and win.
Warnings: Angst, language.
Previous Parts:
Prologue,
Chapter One,
Chapter Two,
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I got really excited when I saw this posted :) really great, can't wait for the next chapter!
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Ugh, I hope they can work it out, this makes me so sad :( Dom feeling unequal and so dependant and Matt feeling like he can't do anything right.... If only Dom would just get his hearing back, but that would be the easy solution, right? Suddenly all will be fine, but they will always have that feeling that when things get REALLY tough, they WON'T be able to handle it together.
It would be so much better if they can work this out together this way... That way it'll show that their love can truly conquer it all. Doesn't look like it's going in the right direction though :/
Missed this story! Glad to see you've updated again! Even if it's a sad one :)
Thanks for sharing, once again!
x
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Thanks for the comment.
&hearts
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How hard it was for Matt to see Dom looking so desperate for him when he’s so used to seeing Dom as the one in control.
That was a very striking sentence! Ah, I'm really worried about the boys now with Damocles' sword hanging above them and Matt's decision. D: Hopefully they can discuss their issues!
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Thanks for reading!
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excellent chapter, love this story :D
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Thanks for reading!
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