Fic: Space They Cannot Touch

May 13, 2011 17:13

Title: Chapter Thirteen: Service Fee
Pairing: Matthew/Dominic
Rating: PG-13
Summary:  Morning brings melancholy and a big mistake. 
Disclaimer: I do not own Muse. The events within are entirely fictional. 
Betas: The dynamic duo millionstar  and dolce_piccante  . You both are made of beauty and win. 
Warnings: Angst, language. 
Previous Parts:   Prologue, Chapter One, Chapter Two, ( Read more... )

muse, fic, matthew/dominic, space they cannot touch

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mandaai May 13 2011, 09:46:33 UTC
NO. NO NO NO NO NO. Unacceptable behavior Matthew!!!

I got really excited when I saw this posted :) really great, can't wait for the next chapter!

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frolicandfall May 18 2011, 08:19:12 UTC
Thanks so much for reading! I'm glad you liked it. :)

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xavje May 13 2011, 11:38:07 UTC
Well, bloody good friend you are trying to be, forgetting Dom's appointment!

Ugh, I hope they can work it out, this makes me so sad :( Dom feeling unequal and so dependant and Matt feeling like he can't do anything right.... If only Dom would just get his hearing back, but that would be the easy solution, right? Suddenly all will be fine, but they will always have that feeling that when things get REALLY tough, they WON'T be able to handle it together.

It would be so much better if they can work this out together this way... That way it'll show that their love can truly conquer it all. Doesn't look like it's going in the right direction though :/

Missed this story! Glad to see you've updated again! Even if it's a sad one :)
Thanks for sharing, once again!

x

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frolicandfall May 18 2011, 08:20:30 UTC
So true. Forgetting about Dom's appointment does through a rather large spanner into the works. Poor Matt. He's not going to be happy when he realises what he's done...

Thanks for the comment.

&hearts

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thekeyholder May 13 2011, 11:41:59 UTC
Oh my god, I want to hug this story! I missed it greatly! <3

How hard it was for Matt to see Dom looking so desperate for him when he’s so used to seeing Dom as the one in control.

That was a very striking sentence! Ah, I'm really worried about the boys now with Damocles' sword hanging above them and Matt's decision. D: Hopefully they can discuss their issues!

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frolicandfall May 18 2011, 08:21:12 UTC
This story shall hug you back! *hugs*

Thanks for reading!

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head_o_rainbows May 13 2011, 11:56:47 UTC
MATTHEW JAMES BELLAMY! STOP BEING A PRICK AND FUCK THE BOY!

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frolicandfall May 18 2011, 08:23:58 UTC
LOL. Sound advice. We'll see if he takes it... ;)

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ashamedbliss May 13 2011, 13:37:14 UTC
Matt, honey, you are NOT helping the situation. GAH these boys need to sit down and have a good, long conversation!

excellent chapter, love this story :D

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frolicandfall May 18 2011, 08:24:58 UTC
Unfortunately it seems like no matter how many good, long conversations they have, they continue to end up in situations like this. I blame my angsty muses.

Thanks for reading!

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