Space They Cannot Touch

Feb 06, 2011 14:30

Title: Chapter Twelve: You're My Home
Pairing: Matthew/Dominic
Rating: PG-13
Summary:  Dom is desperate to get close to Matt, but things don't quite go to plan. 
Disclaimer: I do not own Muse. The events within are entirely fictional. 
Betas: The dynamic duo millionstar and dolce_piccante . You both are made of beauty and win. 
Warnings: Angst, language. 
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frolicandfall May 16 2011, 23:39:54 UTC
You are very welcome. Thank you for reading. :)

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fuckyeahmuse February 6 2011, 07:08:42 UTC
Holy freaking crap.

I don't think you can fathom the sheer excitement that I felt when I saw this updated. I was seriously going to re-read the whole thing tomorrow, and now I've got a wholly new chapter!!!

Yesssssss
<3 <3 <3

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frolicandfall May 16 2011, 23:40:55 UTC
Thanks for the lovely comment!

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thekeyholder February 6 2011, 07:33:09 UTC
Yay, you updated!!! :'D

He knows now that the unconditional patience, support and friendship that Dom has always given Matt is all that the other man has ever really been looking for.

I loved the Scrable scene, the warm and familial atmosphere, Matt and Dom's growing affection for each other! :)

Ah, I thought they would have some fun, but something always gets between their happiness. Great chapter, I can't wait to read more! <3333

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frolicandfall May 16 2011, 23:42:32 UTC
I love playing Scrabble, so that was a fun scene to write. I'm glad you liked it. :)

Life is definitely cock-blocking them majorly right now. :P

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xavje February 6 2011, 08:41:49 UTC
Looy you're back! That was a stunning update, so nice to see the four of them back together again. The scrabble-games were hilarious :D

And Matt is being ridiculous; like Dom said, there are way more manners to find out if someone is enjoying the other, but I guess that when he feels uncomfortable with it, it's not quite the right mindframe to make love with. They need to work on that, maybe take it a bit more slowly :S Poor boys!

Thanks for the update, very enjoyable to read :)

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frolicandfall May 16 2011, 23:43:44 UTC
Thank you for the comment. I'm glad you are still enjoying it.

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starlight_myth February 6 2011, 08:43:44 UTC
I've missed this so much! And when I started reading it I could just feel myself reverting back to the atmosphere this whole story has. It's mesmerizing.

The Scrabble scene was so warm and friendly. Capturing the four of them is really something special and it does complete the entire story.

For the first time in their relationship, Dom feels like they are equals, which is a strange thing to think given that, at present, Dom relies on Matt pretty heavily.

I guess that's a mighty improvement on Dom's part because he really needs to start feeling himself more often.

Yeah Matt, I am. You’ve just as told me that you won’t sleep with me if I don’t regain my hearing. Do you have any idea how that makes me feel? That just broke my heart. It's the perfect example when both of them are right as well as wrong at the same time. Matt has his own wants and so does Dom. But Dom is more vulnerable and that puts Matt in a tough spot. I really hope they pull through. Having them sour again hurts too much ( ... )

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frolicandfall May 16 2011, 23:49:56 UTC
Wow. What a lovely comment. I'm sorry it too so long to respond.

I love reading stories where we see all four of them are together, but I find them very difficult to write. Hopefully we'll get a few more before long.

It's the perfect example when both of them are right as well as wrong at the same time.

That was really something I wanted to explore with this fic; the way two people who are so close can be so far apart sometimes.

Please, add away! Do you mind if I add you in return?

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