Fic: Alley Cats

[frolicandfall]

Title: Alley Cats
Pairing: Matthew/Dominic
Rating: NC-17
Summary: In which the heat of a club and a pounding bass line lead our young heros astray. 
Disclaimer: I do not own Muse. The events within are entirely fictional. 
Betas: The dynamic duo millionstar and dolce_piccante . You both are made of beauty and win. Thanks lovelies!
Warnings: Language. 
Word Count: 2456

Comments

[frolicandfall]

Matt sneakily undressing Dom with his eyes and being oh-so-nonchalant about it, heehee :)

The man has no shame. :P

Thanks hun! I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

[myz_bee]

ooh i love them all squashed up in the crowd...getting all that hot sweaty concert audience contact. perfect excuse for...well, every thing you described oh so well <333

[frolicandfall]

There is something strangely erotic about hot, sweaty moshpits I think. ;)

[ex_shayunkn]

Aw! I like this very much! Hot and sweet! :D

[frolicandfall]

Thanks!

[millionstar]

Oh, you. <3

Matt is torn between envy and admiration. He practices those same moves with his own hands, hidden by the long bar, but he knows they will never look right. He was born to be twitchy and sharp, with none of Dom’s smooth, casual grace.

I love how you've managed to convey Matt's insecurities throughout the fic, that he just could not seem to wrap his head around the notion that Dominic could ever find him attractive or worthy. It broke my heart for him a little.

It’s not exactly the most romantic sentiment Matt has ever heard, but the admission that Dom genuinely wants this touches him in the way no ‘I love you’ ever has.

*hugs forever* What a sweet moment of realization for Matt. :D

Matt has to laugh at that. Even in his wildest fantasies there was no way Dom would get on his knees for Matt. Dom was meant to be worshipped; to lie back whilst Matt poured sweet kisses over every inch of golden perfection. No way is Dom meant to be the guy doing all the work.Same here. Yet this time you've warmed my heart for him

[frolicandfall]

You are always far too kind to me, D. I'm so glad you enjoyed this, as it was your encouragement that got me writing again in the first place.

I had a feeling you would warm to this Matt. ;)

Love you too!

&hearts

[ms_belle10]

Oh, this was absolutely fantastic! I loved how this fic started out as a slow simmer with Matt noticing every minute detail about Dom's appearance (which we all do, of course) and then it began to boil once they got into the hot, sticky crowd...and then the scene in the alley was just perfect. Cheeky and sexy and hot--I found myself wishing we could follow them back to the hotel and see if, indeed, Matt was satisfied by Dom naked and writhing beneath him. Wonderful, wonderful stuff!

[frolicandfall]

A slow simmer is a good way of putting it, or at least that is what I was going for.

I did think about taking it back to the hotel, but now it's up to your imagination! :P