Complex

[frogs_of_war]

The big spring cleaning isn't going to happen, but at least little things are getting done. And I finished the side story, so there's that.

Title: Complex
Chapter: 8
Length: 2867 words
Summary: Hezekiel doesn't like other people in his business, even if they think it's their business. But maybe he'll like the result.

Master list: lj DWHezekiel

Comments

[charisstoma]

Oh I do like the way you brought this around.

Onesimus seems like a Professor who would be good at counseling students who need life skills assistance here. I like the religious/cultural discussion that's overheard by Hezekiel.
Poor Hezekiel's thoughts.
Up to this time it seems he's worked under the impression that he had a superior understanding of how things should be and his world is being opened into different ways of thought and consideration of things, for instance of Dal's parents and Dal's life before he met Hezekiel.
The date with Steele was well done. You didn't have Hezekiel fall into an acceptance right away and his insecurities were a nice touch. His finial acceptance of the wonder of Steele as a lover, *grins* and how lucky he is... very nicely done.

Will there be consequences for the demon who has Dal's parents? It was mentioned that it's not legal, getting Dal's parents away from him wouldn't be enough. That demon might just turn around and acquire other familiars or sentient beings to take their places.

[frogs_of_war]

Thanks.

Onesimus is beloved by his students, he has their backs.

Hezekiel's problem is all demons' problems. He knows the script for his life, but everyone's getting their lines wrong.

Thanks. Hezekiel's ride isn't totally smooth, but Steele is patient and kind. (And great with his hands)

Now that is the story I've been working on today. It was kind of hard to write, but I'm past the point that would need warnings for animal and people abuse. My main character is hoping to leave scars on the SOB, and he might get the chance.