Be My Queen, chapter two

[frogs_of_war]

Rewriting any story means changing it: moving scenes to better places, making sequences more logical, giving better motivations, fixing plot holes, weaving in dangling bits. I understand that. But one of the scary parts for me is how the characters change. Now the change can give to story more emotion impact and the characters more logical

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[charisstoma]

All of them are in the process of transitioning?
It's a good, natural feeling look inside a person who is trapped in a body of the wrong gender.
Am sensing a bias against teen snobs of the female persuasion. *grins*
Now let's see if Lj is over it's 'varnish' error.

[frogs_of_war]

Yes. None have money for more than drugs though. I based these girls on girls from a radio article. Ariel was a common name as well as a icon to them. She became a real girl.

Thank you.

Teen snobs of the female persuasion are the worst kind of teen snob. And, really, boys are outside her social circle. Girls are the ones that can hurt her. They can easily be what she dreams of being.