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frog_artjuice

Visiting Smallville: 18b/21

Sep 20, 2011 17:29

OMG an update! I've been watching Series One of Smallville and I had to sit down and write some of this. I hope you read this... although maybe part 1 should be reread.

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smallville, dean winchester, supernatural, part eighteen, chloe sullivan, clark kent, chlam, fic: visiting smallville, sam winchester, chlark

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lgl_ntt09 September 21 2011, 06:20:48 UTC

You updated and the world is still spinning! JK, couldn't resist the poke. It's a good update, glad to see you're still working on it. To be honest, I'd completely forgotten about it.
Mopey Sam, there's almost no words for him. At least Chloe provided what comfort she could. I'd write more but it's late and I'm tired. It's good to see you back and waiting eagerly for more. Thanks!

frog_artjuice September 21 2011, 11:31:24 UTC

Thanks!
Is it bad to say that I also completely forgot about it? I haven't watched Supernatural in a very... very long time.
I'm glad you enjoyed it, it was really hard to start writing it again.

bellajennza September 22 2011, 09:05:32 UTC

Yay, you updated! I read the whole thing again and was surprised to find how much I still enjoyed it. Loved the Chloe/Sam & Chloe/Dean dynamics & I'd love to see how Sam reacts to Chloe dating another tk- Justin. Nice to see mopey!Sam & recovering!Sam sticking to Chloe & Dean. How will the dance work out? And has no-one (Dean) pointed out to Sam how much Gabe would freak if Chloe were actually dating a hunter? Or even a houseguest?

Really glad to see this again!

frog_artjuice September 22 2011, 11:41:23 UTC

Thanks!
I'm happy you even remembered this existed!

shanna9064 October 17 2011, 04:14:19 UTC

Woo hoo! I'm so glad you got back to writing this story. Just a couple weeks ago I was thinking about it when I got on a Chloe fanfic kick again, so I must have sent some good muse vibes your way.

I feel bad for Sam. Poor guy. After everything he and Dean were taught by their dad about beings with special abilities it can't be easy to now think of yourself as possibly one of the hunted instead of one of the hunters. Thank goodness he finally got out of the house.

All kinds of jealousy popping up in Smallville, isn't there? Sam, Clark, Pete. I think Dean's the only one not jealous...amused, yes. Jealous, no. It's also pretty funny how he keeps running away from Lana. I never thought I'd see the day Dean ran away from a pretty girl. He's probably hoping she shows some supernatural tendencies so he can break out the sawed off shotgun, then salt and burn the body.

Keep up the great work and don't be such a stranger. I'm sending you a virtual whip to use on your muse to get it cooperating again. Take care!