Comments | frith_in_thorns: [Teyla thing-a-thon fic] The Eyes in the Forest

frith_in_thorns

[Teyla thing-a-thon fic] The Eyes in the Forest

Aug 13, 2011 15:21

Title: The Eyes in the Forest (for teylafen )
Recipient: chokolattejedi
Prompt used: Bars can’t hold us
Word count: 3200 words
Pairing: Gen, Teyla and Jennifer friendship
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Some violence

Summary: The gaolers are the least of their worries, now that night has fallen.

( The night sky was a rich dark green )

fanfic, promptfic, fic: sga, gen

Comments 9

michelel72 August 13 2011, 16:08:20 UTC

Oh, wow. This is really powerful, and I adore the way you evoke scenery.

frith_in_thorns August 13 2011, 16:13:57 UTC

Thank you very much! I really enjoy coming up with alien planets :)

leesa_perrie August 13 2011, 19:15:20 UTC

Oh, this is lovely! The friendship between Teyla and Jennifer really shines through - and I love the panthers, especially when they help them escape! Cool!

frith_in_thorns August 17 2011, 14:54:57 UTC

Thank you very much! I love writing friendship fics for these two :)

tielan August 20 2011, 10:57:31 UTC

Ooh, nice work - the opening scene is beautifully atmospheric, and the description of the planet, the men, the prison, and the creatures is wonderful!

I admit, I've always wanted to see an episode where the team came across some genetically modified creatures that Teyla could communicate with via the Wraith gene, so I was secretly hoping for that! But this is good, too! Alien cultures, ahoy!

frith_in_thorns August 23 2011, 21:07:45 UTC

Ooh, that's a cool idea :P

Thank you very much! I adore alien cultures, and I had a lot of fun writing this story. I'm glad that you liked the descriptions :)

schneefink August 21 2011, 13:59:38 UTC

Intelligent panthers at night - wow, that's a beautiful image! Especially together with the scenery. I also liked the friendship between Teyla and Jennifer.

frith_in_thorns August 23 2011, 21:08:16 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm really glad that you enjoyed this :)

fitzwiggity June 14 2012, 17:06:43 UTC

Found you through Sholio when leaving a comment about her latest meme! I'm glad, you have fanfiction!!! :D

I honestly haven't read SGA in what feels like AGES but I read this one, and it made me think somewhat of Sholio's fanfic "The Hunters" with the Teyla/Jennifer friendship, though shorter, and it didn't have McKay in it. I rather liked the prose of the story, and the way that it felt really realistic as I read this. I loved the description details, and the story itself was just PERFECT.

Glad to have meet yet another SGA writer whose good at writing SGA. :)