Fire (1/3)
anonymous
February 12 2012, 23:35:34 UTC
Ugh, he thinks as he wakes up. It had felt really good a few seconds ago, but now it’s just messy and uncomfortable. A fucking wet dream? He hasn’t had any of those since he started shagging Amy. Shagging? Man, he’s been hanging around Peter way too long. Oh my god. Peter. The entire dream comes surging back into his head, too much information all at once, but he remembers, in vivid, vivid detail….
You’ve taken out that vampire. The one that thought it’d be funny to come to Fright Night. That bastard was your seventh. No eighth. Seventh. Do you count Ed? No, never count Ed. He was a casualty, not a victory. But now, now it’s time to celebrate, so you take a swig from Peter’s flask as you get into his car. It tastes like fire, and you wonder at the idea of green fire. If it would spew from the Mirage volcano, would that throw the tourists off kilter? Maybe St. Patrick’s Day, all the Strip fountains should be green. Wet fire. Makes no sense, kinda like Peter. Like you and Peter. Like vampires in Vegas. Like
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Fire (2/3)
anonymous
February 12 2012, 23:36:42 UTC
Sorry you say to Amy, but she smiles, lifts both hands off the wheel and gives you a double thumbs up. She’s happy for you. She leaves the car with a door slam and a wave through the window. The sun is setting and you’re really going to come. You say that to Peter. Maybe. Maybe you were just thinking about what it’d feel like to come in his mouth. Amy’s never done that. Always finishes with her hand. Peter laughs and it feels so strange, his laugh, around you, his stubble against your thigh. What a dream detail, way to go subconscious! Don’t come yet you think Peter must say, but you don’t see his mouth move because you can’t see his mouth. Because he’s behind you, you’re in his lap, sort of. Your back to his chest and you can feel his hard-on, and you’ve never felt anyone else’s before, and really, this car is very accommodating
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Fire (3/3)
anonymous
February 12 2012, 23:37:46 UTC
And then your name again, clearer, his words like that liquid fire of your victory drink, hot against you, and you come. And you can’t remember it ever feeling so intense, like every bit of you, every nerve is exploding or imploding with the pleasure. Like how can this not kill you? Because Peter is still there, anchoring you. How can somebody so…… be your anchor? You open your eyes and you’re still dreaming. Look down and it looks absolutely obscene, come on his fingers and against the chair, the shiny floor. But it doesn’t matter, you don’t have to look at it, just blink. Blink and you’re awake.
A fucking wet dream? He hasn’t had any of those since he started shagging Amy. Shagging? Man, he’s been around Peter way too long. Oh my god. Peter. The entire dream comes surging back into his head, too much info all at once, but he remembers, in vivid, sense-memory detail
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Holy crap! What a quick and AMAZING fill! I totally love the tone of this, you got that dream-like quality just right, which is difficult (like, of COURSE you can stand up in the back of a car!), and Amy making driving noises made me LOL. And hot, of course. This is just...beautiful, is really the word I'm looking for. Thank you so much!
Thank YOU for the prompt. It was so fun and freeing. I could throw in random things like green volcanoes and not worry about technicalities like clothes!
Thank you for the lovely comment, I'm so happy you enjoyed the fic! :D
Re: Fire (3/3)
anonymous
February 13 2012, 05:13:16 UTC
Thank you so much! Writing dreams is fun because dream logic is basically anything goes!
I'll think about that sequel. ;) Because yeah, Charley all anxious to see if the real thing lives up to dreams but not being able to act on it. Peter making him squirm when he finds out, until he shows him it's BETTER than dreams... Ahem um. How would he find out, I wonder?
Re: Fire (3/3)hiddentimelordFebruary 15 2012, 05:10:52 UTC
O_O
I love all the crazy weird details! Now that's what a written down sex dream should be like! You see so many fic's out there where everything is so straight forward like it's happening real time when in reality dreams never make sense even if they're about sexy things. I love it! I was just giggling away imagining all the green volcanoes and Amy driving the car, and the end was really hot too (loved the imagery with the back of the chair. Mrrowr ;3)
Re: Fire (3/3)
anonymous
February 15 2012, 06:07:20 UTC
Thank you so much! I was actually worried that I'd dropped off the weird details too much during the sex. But I did so so that it would stay hot and not get too distracting, and because I think even in dreams, when it comes to sex, one's focus seems to... narrow (mimicking real sex, I should think!). ;) I'm really happy it all worked for you.
You’ve taken out that vampire. The one that thought it’d be funny to come to Fright Night. That bastard was your seventh. No eighth. Seventh. Do you count Ed? No, never count Ed. He was a casualty, not a victory. But now, now it’s time to celebrate, so you take a swig from Peter’s flask as you get into his car. It tastes like fire, and you wonder at the idea of green fire. If it would spew from the Mirage volcano, would that throw the tourists off kilter? Maybe St. Patrick’s Day, all the Strip fountains should be green. Wet fire. Makes no sense, kinda like Peter. Like you and Peter. Like vampires in Vegas. Like ( ... )
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A fucking wet dream? He hasn’t had any of those since he started shagging Amy. Shagging? Man, he’s been around Peter way too long. Oh my god. Peter. The entire dream comes surging back into his head, too much info all at once, but he remembers, in vivid, sense-memory detail ( ... )
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Thank you for the lovely comment, I'm so happy you enjoyed the fic! :D
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and a sequel with Peter finding out? UM YES PLEASE?
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I'll think about that sequel. ;) Because yeah, Charley all anxious to see if the real thing lives up to dreams but not being able to act on it. Peter making him squirm when he finds out, until he shows him it's BETTER than dreams... Ahem um. How would he find out, I wonder?
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I love all the crazy weird details! Now that's what a written down sex dream should be like! You see so many fic's out there where everything is so straight forward like it's happening real time when in reality dreams never make sense even if they're about sexy things. I love it! I was just giggling away imagining all the green volcanoes and Amy driving the car, and the end was really hot too (loved the imagery with the back of the chair. Mrrowr ;3)
Love love love it!
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Thanks again. :D
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