Hard To Get, part 1 of 2
anonymous
October 7 2011, 22:37:41 UTC
Peter Vincent likes to think of himself as hard to get. Sure, he'll fuck anything that talks and walks on two legs, and don't think for a second that he wouldn't happily include his two young comrades in vampire eradication into that lot, but still...for some reason, and particularly more-so with Charley and Amy, it's important to him recently that he be perceived as not being entirely led around by his dick. A few months ago he never would have given a shit what anyone else thought of him, but since having actually stepped up and briefly become a hero, and faced with the attention that brings - adoration, gratitude, and a host of other positive reinforcement he's unfamiliar with receiving - he's decided he prefers being the Good Guy. At least, sometimes, which is a big change from his previous preference of Who-gives-a-fuck
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Hard To Get, part 2 of 2
anonymous
October 7 2011, 22:38:40 UTC
What he thinks but doesn't say: If you want this, you'll have to convince me. Beautiful young women line up outside his theater to fuck him every day of the week, and it has nothing to do with actually wanting him and everything to do with his picture hanging larger-than-life over the casino floor. With Charley and Amy, it better fucking mean something, because he's faced death with them and come out the other side, and for Peter it's about more with these two than just getting his dick wet. He actually likes them
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OMG. This is everything I wanted AND MORE. I love how in character these guys are. With so few words you have me totally believing that not only is Charley A-okay with watching his GF blow someone else, but that he really, really wants to fuck him (the italics? *is ded*). And Peter! With the arrogance, that slight hint of insecurity, the not wanting to break her concentration!
You could have gone totally cracky here or phoned in the characterization in faavor of smuttier smut, but I'm so happy you didn't. Though it goes without saying, this is CRAZY HOT. My only complaint? No part 3! ;)
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You could have gone totally cracky here or phoned in the characterization in faavor of smuttier smut, but I'm so happy you didn't. Though it goes without saying, this is CRAZY HOT. My only complaint? No part 3! ;)
THANK YOU!
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