Fill: Why (1/2)
anonymous
September 25 2011, 23:06:31 UTC
He's standing in the doorway of Peter's kitchen. He is going to be late for class, but that doesn’t motivate him to move. He had been hurriedly wolfing down some cereal, but he's set it on the table now, entranced by watching Peter putter around the kitchen, making coffee, toasting bread. All perfectly ordinary. Like they hadn't killed yet another vampire last night (seriously when were Jerry's friends going to stop coming out of the woodwork, seeking revenge?), like they hadn't fucked 6 hours ago on black satin sheets.
Charley shifts a little uncomfortably.
“I don't get it,” he says.
“What's that?” Peter asks, looking up from stirring sugar into his cup.
“I don't…” he clears his throat, not sure he wants to get into this. But goes on, anyway. “I don’t like guys.”
“No?” Peter sounds only mildly curious.
“I mean, I don't think about them. I don't see a dude walking down the street and think, hey I'd like to fuck that guy. I never have. I like girls.”
“So do I.”
“I like fucking girls.” Okay, so he's only fucked one
( ... )
Fill: Why (2/2)
anonymous
September 25 2011, 23:07:32 UTC
Peter pauses a moment. “It’s because I’m so pretty.”
Charley makes a strangled noise half-laugh, half-please-don’t-stop.
“Maybe,” Peter continues, and he’s serious now, “It’s because we could die tonight. Or tomorrow. Maybe there’s no earthly reason you shouldn’t. Why we shouldn’t
( ... )
Re: Fill: Why (2/2)alex_caligariSeptember 26 2011, 16:50:53 UTC
I AM the OP, and I really liked this. I love how Charley is the crude one and Peter the (somewhat) restrained one. It's a nice, sharp contrast to the original source. Cheers!
Re: Fill: Why (2/2)
anonymous
September 27 2011, 02:47:34 UTC
Oh I'm so glad you liked it. Wasn't sure if it'd be okay to take it over into smut territory...
I wasn't even really thinking of that, the contrast to the source. I was just trying to make Charley feel like an 18 yr old! :D But happy you appreciated it. :)
Charley shifts a little uncomfortably.
“I don't get it,” he says.
“What's that?” Peter asks, looking up from stirring sugar into his cup.
“I don't…” he clears his throat, not sure he wants to get into this. But goes on, anyway. “I don’t like guys.”
“No?” Peter sounds only mildly curious.
“I mean, I don't think about them. I don't see a dude walking down the street and think, hey I'd like to fuck that guy. I never have. I like girls.”
“So do I.”
“I like fucking girls.” Okay, so he's only fucked one ( ... )
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Charley makes a strangled noise half-laugh, half-please-don’t-stop.
“Maybe,” Peter continues, and he’s serious now, “It’s because we could die tonight. Or tomorrow. Maybe there’s no earthly reason you shouldn’t. Why we shouldn’t ( ... )
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ETA: "...I think about fucking Amy when she's not around.”
“So do I.” Peter's eyes twinkle, amused.
LOL. Perfect!
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You know Peter would wind him up during that conversation. ;) I made him take it easy on Charley. Erm, so to speak. :D
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I wasn't even really thinking of that, the contrast to the source. I was just trying to make Charley feel like an 18 yr old! :D But happy you appreciated it. :)
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