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fried_flamingo

Near Wild Heaven 2/3

Apr 10, 2008 11:34

Title: Near Wild Heaven
Author: Laura H fried_flamingo
Rating: NC-17
Category: Angst, J/E, Sex
Disclaimer: The Mouse Owns All

First Chapter here.

( Be careful, son. Anger’s a dangerous thing to cling onto. Turns all it touches rancid. Makes it rotten. Trust me on that )

j/e, potc, fic

Comments 27

salr323 April 10 2008, 11:54:54 UTC

You posted! I love this, as you know, so angsty and hot. Poor Jack, I feel for him so much in this chapter. *sigh*

How's part 3 coming??

fried_flamingo April 10 2008, 19:54:55 UTC

Yey!

And poor Jack indeed. I'd be happy to offer him a comforting hug (for starters ;)).

Started Ch.3 but not very far into it so far. Been too focussed on this other thing I'm writing, hehe.

drillingcat April 10 2008, 12:39:56 UTC

oh sweet jeezus...

that was awesome!

fried_flamingo April 10 2008, 19:55:44 UTC

Exactly the response I was looking for! Ta :D

tuesday_suit April 10 2008, 15:09:04 UTC

Wahoo, the porn adventure continues! ;-)

But Teague had merely puffed on his pipe and said quietly, “’Tweren’t that battle I were talking about.”

Hee! Perceptive old boy, inne?

Jack gripped the helm, his gaze fixed dead ahead. “Think we both know what me answer to that’s goin’ to be, mate.”

Why, Jack, whatever has you in such a hurry.....

Jack’s hand passed gently over the worn wood of the ship’s wheel. “That’s my girl,” he whispered, with a smile.

Gah, I love those moments between him and the Pearl. She'll always be his first love, eh?

“She ain’t here, boy.”

Jack frowned at him. “Don’t know what you mean,” he said, with a pout

BWAH! Teague is perfect here - I can see him almost rolling his eyes at Jack's pretended ignorance.

The doors flew open and a breathless voice said, “Captain Teague, why did no one alert me to the return of…?” Elizabeth’s sharp voice tailed off as her gaze settled on Jack.Hee! Slow down there, young one, and rein in that eagerness a touch. It wouldn't do for the King to be so completely ( ... )

fried_flamingo April 10 2008, 19:56:57 UTC

hee! Thanks, hun. Glad you liked the porn ;)

Sorry I've not been in touch but I've got a lot of free time this weekend so you can expect something in your inbox by Sunday at the latest :)

tuesday_suit April 10 2008, 20:06:56 UTC

Gah, no worries at all - did you get my message about my dead computer? Blech. I'm trying to make some progress while I'm at work but it's slow going. Speaking of porn, you're nearly at that chapter, I believe. ;-)

fried_flamingo April 10 2008, 20:14:14 UTC

Yeah, got your message. That totally sucks! Hope you can get a new one soon.

you're nearly at that chapter, I believe. ;-)

I am and I can't wait!

skybound2 April 10 2008, 18:10:08 UTC

*fans self* Well, that was...wow. The imagery of the two of them against the Galleon, combined with the heady description of the rain and heat around them, is just breathtaking. I love how Teague arranged the little meet and greet, and how both Jack and Liz realized that they were both rash in their decelerations last time. Great update. Looking forward to the last part.

fried_flamingo April 10 2008, 19:58:20 UTC

Thanks, love! I have to say rain!sex is a bit of a personal kink of mine so I'm glad it worked here.

I think they've moved on frmo the anger that existed between them before but there's still a lot unsaid. Ch.3 will deal with that.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

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fried_flamingo April 11 2008, 00:00:04 UTC

hey, no pain, no gain, right?

;)

Thanks for reading and commenting :)