Comments | fried_flamingo: PotC Fic: A Green Isle in the Sea, NC-17

fried_flamingo

PotC Fic: A Green Isle in the Sea, NC-17

Mar 17, 2009 19:52

Title: A Green Isle in the Sea
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: J/E
Word Count: 4,202
Disclaimer: The Mouse Owns All
A/N: At last, a response to the hseas_challenge erotica prompt. Set post-CotBP, Elizabeth and Jack meet on Port Royal. Blatant, unapologetic PWP. Feedback adored, as always!

( For one hour a week, her father allowed her a modicum of freedom, although when she told him what she intended on doing with that free hour, he had almost changed his mind. )

j/e, potc, fic

Comments 40

whensheflies March 17 2009, 20:56:10 UTC

*gasp*

I was so happy to see this pop up on my flist. This was simply delightful. The rushed heat of the moment, the risk of getting caught. Muahaha. Fantastic.

I got a little teary-eyed at the end with the "Love, who am I?" bit. *sigh* I am an absolute sucker for J/E in the CotBP era.

Thank you for writing this! ♥

fried_flamingo March 18 2009, 22:15:58 UTC

Thank you so much for such a lovely comment! This was a lot of fun to write, so I'm glad you enjoyed it :D

lady_di75 March 17 2009, 21:55:14 UTC

Ahhhh!!!! LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!! (I so needed that too... )

So glad you haven't abandoned ship ;) I also love that Jack couldn't remember Estrella's name -- and "don't ask don't ask"...
Great stuff! Mwah!

fried_flamingo March 18 2009, 22:17:27 UTC

Oh I'm really glad you enjoyed it, love!

I definitely haven't abandoned ship and in fact I have another couple of ideas buzzing about in my head in response to the comm challenges.

Thanks for reading and commenting *hugs*

lady_di75 March 19 2009, 03:10:38 UTC

Once I have my head screwed on straight again (in about 15 years), I look forward to catching up on some of this new stuff... and I had been into the Arthur stuff, too, but just lost the threads of everything as I got closer to having the baby. I actually bought books the other day -- why, I have no idea, as the likelihood of actually reading them is decades away.

fried_flamingo March 19 2009, 21:49:28 UTC

I hope you get some free time soon. It's been lovely seeing you around again :D

awickedwench March 18 2009, 00:13:50 UTC

Always, she would find herself longing for salt water spray and sun-gilded horizons.

Loved that line....and of course, the rest was hotness at it's best! Well done! :)

fried_flamingo March 18 2009, 22:17:58 UTC

Thanks, love! Glad you liked it :D

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fried_flamingo March 18 2009, 22:19:02 UTC

OH thanks you so much! I'm really pleased you enjoyed it. It was a lot of fun to write.

And they just may be a little bath scene around the corner, if RL ever gives me a break ;)

geekmama March 18 2009, 01:57:00 UTC

Great ending, and the rest so very hot, just delicious! I loved the detail of the market, too, and Weatherby's cluelessness (of course!). I too was very happy to see you'd posted this. Thank you!!

fried_flamingo March 18 2009, 22:20:12 UTC

Thanks you! Poor Weatherby, he really doesn't get it.

Happy to be posting fic again! I just wish I had 48 hours in the day to write all the bunnies that hop around in my head :)