Missing, Chapter 2--So Much Mine

Sep 06, 2007 15:16

Title: Missing, Chapter 2--So Much Mine ( Read more... )

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thatdudejoe September 6 2007, 20:18:43 UTC
This story is so interesting and mysterious and stuff. haha. I can't wait to meet Callie!

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vacheqirit September 6 2007, 20:48:18 UTC
Thanks Joe. Hope Callie will live up to your expectations. I'm taking a big risk, introducing such a major player this way. Thanks for reading.

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maryilee September 6 2007, 20:44:06 UTC
Oh, shoot! I really want to read this, and what I did read was great, but the Tami/Julie thing is too close to where I'm heading with my fic Clear Eyes, so I have to stop reading! Darn! Well, maybe that will give me incentive to do some writing, so I can come back and finish this. It's really wonderful.

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vacheqirit September 6 2007, 20:54:03 UTC
Oh, just skip the Tami/Julie section and go read the rest! They are just the tip of the iceberg. Thanks for the nice feedback, though.

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requitedhope September 7 2007, 01:54:07 UTC
OMG. Everytime I read a story of yours I become more obsessed with the language and description and perfection. I've already read the Matt and Julie scene three times and it may be one of my favorites ever. The movements and detail made me feel like it was not only on TV, but I was standing right there. Just.....amazing. I can't wait for the next chapter and to see how Matt does with his mom.

I'm going to be printing out this section and the one from Devil Town for my wall. Hope you don't mind!

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vacheqirit September 7 2007, 10:53:57 UTC
It's always a happy day for me when you're pleased with something I wrote. I'm honored you'd want to "print me out." Thanks for reading.

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a_h_c September 7 2007, 13:22:50 UTC
I really enjoyed this chapter. I could totally picture Matt and Julie in the hammock and I do feel for Pam. I am looking forward to seeing how it unfolds as it goes along.

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vacheqirit September 7 2007, 13:50:21 UTC
Thank you. I'm glad the hammock scene was true to the show. Also happy you feel for Pam. Thanks for reading.

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