Oh, shoot! I really want to read this, and what I did read was great, but the Tami/Julie thing is too close to where I'm heading with my fic Clear Eyes, so I have to stop reading! Darn! Well, maybe that will give me incentive to do some writing, so I can come back and finish this. It's really wonderful.
OMG. Everytime I read a story of yours I become more obsessed with the language and description and perfection. I've already read the Matt and Julie scene three times and it may be one of my favorites ever. The movements and detail made me feel like it was not only on TV, but I was standing right there. Just.....amazing. I can't wait for the next chapter and to see how Matt does with his mom.
I'm going to be printing out this section and the one from Devil Town for my wall. Hope you don't mind!
I really enjoyed this chapter. I could totally picture Matt and Julie in the hammock and I do feel for Pam. I am looking forward to seeing how it unfolds as it goes along.
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I'm going to be printing out this section and the one from Devil Town for my wall. Hope you don't mind!
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