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whiteotter in fridaynight_fic

Timfic: "Momentum"

Mar 20, 2007 21:34

Happy Wednesday (assuming most of you may not read this late on a Tuesday night)! For a change of pace, I bring you... Timfic. :)

( Title: Momentum )

character - bo (temp), character - mom neighbour (temp), character - tim riggins, pairing - tim/mom

Comments 7

anonymous March 21 2007, 01:47:48 UTC

Okay, pass the tissues!!! That was fantabulous!!! Excellently written. I could go on and on. :)

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whiteotter March 21 2007, 15:29:37 UTC

Yay! Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. :)

And thanks for re-posting under your login, btw. Love that icon.

yourwinter0319 March 21 2007, 04:43:55 UTC

out of this world.. Do you know I have been refreshing this page over and over hoping this continuation would come soon... I can't wait for the next one... Amazing Woderful Job

whiteotter March 21 2007, 15:30:13 UTC

Heee. Oh, hee! Did you really? That's so cool.

Very, very glad you're liking it.

elzed March 21 2007, 09:13:22 UTC

Very, very nice indeed. And how you could resist Tim's charms (or make her resist...) I do not know, especially after that hothot kitchen clinch... God knows I would've forgotten my children at that point! But you wrote her perfectly.

And kudos for managing to write the entire fic so far without mentioning her first name!

WIll there be a follow-up?

whiteotter March 21 2007, 15:37:27 UTC

My beta commented that she must be made of steel to resist TR, and I thought... you know, she kinda is. I don't know what they're going to do with her on FNL, obviously, but in this fic at least she is really focused on Bo and making sure he's okay. I, too, would have abandoned all thoughts of my children, but that's just me. ;)

I refuse to name this woman until SOMEONE on the show says her name. Maybe they will tonight.

My fanfic usually dovetails with what they do in the canon, so... more installments depend on where FNL takes the characters, to some extent. I've rarely ventured into Alternate Universe territory. I do have 2-3 more chapters in my head, but we'll have to see.

Thanks for your feedback, elzed! :)

lilisullivan March 21 2007, 16:29:19 UTC

God, that girl has such willpower! It must be really hard to resist Tim Riggins lol.
I'm torn here because Tim and the mother have such chemistry, but she made the right choice because the Tim/Bo relationship must be salvage. And Tim really need a friend to talk to, since loosing Jason and stuff, Bo can't replace Jason, being a 6 year old and all that, but his mother maybe can help him.