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whiteotter in fridaynight_fic

Timfic: "Bruised"

Mar 17, 2007 09:58

Happy St. Patrick's Day! I bring you new Timfic. :)

And like blood for grass, feedback makes the fic grow. Heh.

Title: ( Bruised )

character - bo (temp), character - tim riggins, character - billy riggins

Comments 8

lilisullivan March 17 2007, 14:34:33 UTC

this is just fantastic! You made me cry you know that?
I have to say i would have reacted the same way Tim has, i would have been scared to death!

whiteotter March 17 2007, 15:42:10 UTC

Made someone cry? YAY!

That's awesome. You made my day. Thank you.

I, too, would have been absolutely terrified, in Tim's position. Gah.

elzed March 17 2007, 20:11:15 UTC

Oh, I'm loving this. And yes, he saved Bo's neck (like, literally, dude...) so... I'd cut him slack (no, really, I would. If it was my kid I would have grabbed and shaken him, too. And yes, of course it's not his kid, and there's all the backstory with Hank, but I get the drive).

Anyhow, I can see this leading... somewhere, eh?

whiteotter March 18 2007, 01:03:42 UTC

You're totally, 100% right. I think if it had been anyone OTHER than Tim, the person would have pointed that out. This situation was a case of their baggage crashing into each other - his overreacting to Bo because he wasn't able to save Jason, and her freaking out over something violent based on her history with Hank.

Somewhere, possibly, but definitely the long way 'round. :)

OMG yourwinter0319 March 18 2007, 05:10:20 UTC

Ok so when I first watched "Extended Families" I absolutely went crazy for the Bo/Tim scenes. I was already in love with Riggins but them throwing in a six year old absolutely got me rolling. So to add to my obsession of FML I decided to find fan fiction of FNL. SO when I found Tim/Bo fic I seriously almost jumped up in the air.... Tell me that their is more to come.... I love these stories and you are really a great writer, especially how you write Tim, his mannorisms, his reactions and his overall look on things. I absolutely love Bo/Tim....

Seriously though awesome story and I can't wait for more.

Re: OMG whiteotter March 18 2007, 21:38:28 UTC

Hee! Thank you. I am hoping to write four or five more fics. I actually call them episodes, because they come to me very visually, which I think helps in describing mannerisms and reactions.

Thanks for the encouragement! I'll post more soon.

Re: OMG yourwinter0319 March 19 2007, 02:52:20 UTC

Are they going to be all Tim fics, with BO???

Re: OMG whiteotter March 19 2007, 11:12:03 UTC

LOL. In this series, mostly, yes. :)