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Bone Cutter [Original Story]

Dec 11, 2008 16:47

A story based on the poem I wrote, Bone Cutter, Witch Doctor. Worksafe, and I would love some feedback. ^^

( The children always peered at him; he was an anomaly, something new and different, and besides, they were too young to really understand fear. )

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drelfina December 11 2008, 23:13:57 UTC

I'm reminded of a faintly vampiric fic I'd once written wherein the house/setting/books would devour someone stupid enough to go in, and leave them a shrivelled, old husk until some new blood came by, and then they'd switch places and the older person was free to flee.

>.>

Vivien's death was so, so dumb. Also, I wanted the Bone Cutter to rape him.

>.>

<.<

frickin_cheng December 11 2008, 23:18:30 UTC

oooh. thats sounds cool....

*snerk* you would. And you don't know if it didnt happen. >> I left it open to interpretation.

drelfina December 12 2008, 03:50:54 UTC

I like more hints! :D

and yeah, I like the description of the bonecutter. Very other-world, more like a demon/monster in human form. Inhuman? Unhuman, more like. And people don't notice it.

frickin_cheng December 12 2008, 04:48:17 UTC

maaa, fine, fine, you caught me. I didn't actually think that the bone cutter would rape him.

hee. i was thinking of a corpse, the Y incision being the one from an autopsy. yeah, people don't notice, cause he gave them stuff, and as long as it wasn't their child being...whatever he did to Vivien. >>

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