When You Ask Me To

[freysan]

Title: When You Ask Me To
Pairing: KokiMaru
Rating: NC-17 (?)
Chapter: Oneshot
Summary: The first five times they fucked.
Note: Finished... After toiling for it for almost a month.

Comments

[aoi_tenshi05]

LET ME CLAIM THIS SPOT. *now goes back to reading*

[aoi_tenshi05]

GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!! WHAT IS COHERENCE???? щ(ﾟДﾟщ)

whoah, twin!!! EPIC SMUTFIC for an EPIC COMEBACK and I can't get enough already! o(≧o≦)o

More? Please?

[freysan]

smut-addict - that's totally you... but i'm afraid after this, i have no more idea for smut... TT-TT

i'm trying on the emotional aspects of the fics, though... i need more practice on that... (>.<)

and i really missed taNakamaru... sooo much~!!!

[haruna_io]

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!! *___________* hot, sweet, raw in the same time!!! *_* ILUUUUU!!!! Thank you Frey!!! Thank you! I loved ittttt!!!

[freysan]

haru-chan~!!! thank you very much for liking my fic... i really, really, really miss them sooo much~!!! i think they deserve more, though... i miss you... *blush*

[haruna_io]

me too!! miss youuu!!!
How have you been doing dear? :)

[freysan]

hungry... *head-desk*
i quit one of my jobs but i replaced it with another... but i have more control over my time now, and i'm trying to return to the fandom slowly... i have a lot of catching up to do... (>.<)

[loveyourself6]

Oh my God. That last line. THAT LAST LINE. YOU TRYIN' TO MAKE ME WEEP????

Obviously, I loved it. Normally I shy away from TaNaka NC-17 fics because they make me feel awkward and it's usually portrayed in such a bad way that I can't imagine it vividly, but this... While they do the fucking, it isn't weird to read about it and it just fits. You write it in such a way I can't explain, but it's right. It's exactly right for this couple, and for once I don't wince when I read about Maru and fucking in one sentence.

Also, the fact that it's Maru coming on to Koki the first couple of times is great! Normally it'd be a very uncharacteristic thing for him to do, but you managed to make it characteristic, and that's awesome!

Thank you for sharing this!

[freysan]

i'm so happy you liked it~!!! i also loved that last line~!!! (^o^)

but i had a hard time making this fic, too... i wanted to focus on the emotional aspect instead of the smut part but i guess i still have to practice more... and it was so hard making Maru act bolder without being OOC... i guess it worked, though... you said it did and i believe you... fufufu~

thank you so much for the appreciation, darling~!!! *huggles you tight*

[nikkimattei]

Frey!! You're back!! I missed you!! I not a vocal lurker on your page but I love your writing. And I am such a smut addict!! Ugh! And I can't seem to get from under it!! Thanks for sharing so much. Love how you ended it. Yep, Love can just happen.

[freysan]

of course, love SHOULD happen - especially between these two~!!! and i'm so glad you like my work... it makes me very happy to be a shipper... and really, thank you very much~!!! (T^T)

[granity20]

i love this!!!!!
i really love this!!!!
these two....such sweet and delicate relationship....

i'm so glad you're back again!!!makes me excited to read more TaNaka fics from you!!!
thanks so much for this!!!!

[freysan]

my dear~!! i want to thank you for your comment on my ranting last time... that really meant a lot... and i added you as friend (secretly)... but really, thank you for that...

and thank you very much for liking this fic, too... i hope i can make more taNaka fics for you... we have to... let's spread more love for them~!!! (^o^)

[granity20]

any friend of mine in need, i'll immediately come to their rescue and that friends list of mine definitely includes you!!!!

ano...secretly???ahh...are there people spying on us as we speak???do tell me if there is so i can also look behind my back...^^