One Step at a time: 18th Chapter

Mar 29, 2010 14:59


Pairings: tetsu x hyde
Rating: n-17
Disclaimer: You're kidding, right? Don't own. As in, at all.
Summary: A (hopefully) enormously long story of L'Arc~en~Ciel as seen from the perspective of a Tetsuhai fan

Chapter 18 )

tetsuhai, tetsuya, ken, hyde, one step at a time, l'arc~en~ciel, fanfic

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tsuki_626 March 29 2010, 20:18:47 UTC
you may feel you rushed this, but i liked it. especially pissy ken. he doesn't get portrayed all that often, but i'm pretty sure he has a snarky side under all of the good humor. ^ ^

i hope all is well. take care on your journey. we will be here when you return.

btw, i only just realized this morning when i first read this that i had never added you, so i did. that way i can keep up. hope you don't mind.

i hope all goes well on your trip. *hugs*

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freyjam March 29 2010, 20:28:43 UTC
Ken might not like it, but when he has to, he does get serious. And he's good at seeing to the heart of things, even if he doesn't know it :) I kind of like him snarky, actually XD

I don't mind at all, I've already added you back :)

I don't even know when exactly I will be back - it'll be somewhere from one to two weeks. Maybe a miracle will happen and I'll have time for writing, but that's unlikely :( Thank you :) *hugs back*

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tsuki_626 March 29 2010, 21:31:52 UTC
i like snarky, ken or anyone. i get that way too sometimes, even though i am usually a very laidback person(cancerian, if you go for the whole zodiac personality traits thing. amazingly accurate about most things.). i would expect ken and yukkie to both have a bit of snarkiness due to being sagitarians. i have 3 "Sag." women in my family and snarky doesn't even begin to describe the wrath of god they can all throw down as needed. especially the 2 with the same b-day. heh. atomic city. XD

not gripping about sagitarians either. we all have our odd bits.

i used to play a PS2 game called Bard's Tale that had a main character who had the ability to play a scene normal or snarky. obviously the outcome was vastly different. being bad was much more entertaining. XDXD

well, be careful traveling and take care. if you need anything, just give a holler. as i'm still on recuperative time, i have more time to kill than usual. (^-^)bb

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freyjam March 30 2010, 04:25:05 UTC
I'm really not normally into the whole zodiac (or blood type, or whatever XD) business, though I sometimes do find that things do apply. But really, Saggitarians are snarky? My Dad is one and he's like, the most mellow person I've ever known in my whole life and I don't ever expect to find another like him. But then again, he's kind of half Capricorn too. Maybe that means something?

Recuperative time is supposed to be recuperative, you know :) You should be resting, not jumping at opportunities to help others Gods do I know what it means to have a lot of time to kill. I swear, from all the people I know of my age, I'm the one that spent the most time sick That's not to say I won't have it in mind *hugs again*

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a_deux_vitesses March 31 2010, 01:11:05 UTC
Don't worry, it was a good chapter ^^ I have to admit, I wasn't expecting snarky!Ken, but I liked it. And I can picture him acting this way if it's needed.

Even though I really want Sakura to make an appearance, don't push yourself too hard~ I hope your time away from home is enjoyable <3

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freyjam March 31 2010, 11:10:45 UTC
Well, they're going through tough times, it's much more believable that Ken gets snarky now isn't it?

I might not be writing, but at least I've got some time to think things through :) Sakura is appearing in the next chapter *nodnod*

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a_deux_vitesses March 31 2010, 22:34:28 UTC
Yeah.

Well, that's good ^^ Looking forward to the next part~

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karenkk April 2 2010, 21:49:58 UTC
*dances* You updated!!! *hugs*
It's too early in the morning for me to form coherent sentences to praise you properly, so please just let me say how much I love this piece for now!!! *kisses*

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freyjam April 3 2010, 07:09:58 UTC
*hugs back*

Oh my, you know, a comment like this is every bit as wonderful as... well... pretty much anything! I'd be running to write more just because of it... but I can't :( orl

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write_my_dreams July 18 2011, 03:48:25 UTC
I didn't feel like this was rushed. Pissy Ken was needed to make Tetsu and Hyde shut up and stop blaming themselves. Looking forwardt o seeing Sakura come in

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freyjam July 19 2011, 12:03:46 UTC
for some people pissy Ken seemed to look a bit out of character, but I can imagine him like that quite well sometimes :D I'm glad you liked it :)

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