Drabble

Nov 14, 2009 01:11



Huh. Two entries in one day. I must be sick or something XD
This is just a little drabble I whipped out while RPing, and I hope you like it ^^

Title: Time
Pairing: Angeal/Zack
Rating: G
Summary: Movie nights were special.
Notes: This is unbeta'd, so please tell me if there are any mistakes ^^
Angeal and Zack loved watching movies together. )

angeal x zack, drabble, final fantasy

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niflow November 14 2009, 15:19:05 UTC
Aaaaaaawww this is so cute! :D Totally had me melted into a fluffy pile of fluff. X3 I loved it to pieces <3!

Adored this bit:

And if halfway through the movie they would shift so Angeal was holding Zack and Zack was only pretending to watch the movie instead of Angeal, neither would say anything. And if Zack pretended to fall asleep so Angeal would kiss his head softly and whisper something that sounded suspiciously like, "I love you," neither would say anything about that either.

The last line made me sad though. Considering what happens. ;_; Back, angsty thoughts! *shooes them away* They have all the time in our world, anyway. *sniff* I think if the last line was in past tense it might flow just a little better since the whole thing is in past tense, right. Unless you intended it to be like that in which case, totally ignore me. XD

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freyathedark November 14 2009, 22:18:14 UTC
*huggles* I'm so glad you liked it! I was intending it to be a little angsty though, cause they're just so -easy- to make angsty. And it seemed to fit, too.

*re-reads* Huh. You're right, it would flow better that way ^^ Shall change it straightaway, and thanks for letting me know <3

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niflow November 15 2009, 18:48:39 UTC
They really are easy to make angsty, aren't they, the little angst-puffs. XD The proper antidote is then to trap them in fluffy/hot situations, moo hahaha. >D

Awww, *huggles back*~ Anytime <3

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freyathedark November 15 2009, 20:13:02 UTC
*eeeevil grin* You want hot? You should see what I have in the works.

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marchwarden23 November 15 2009, 02:38:07 UTC
=DDDD

So sweet! I love fics that just have those happy little moments. Thank you for sharing this. <3

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freyathedark November 15 2009, 06:00:27 UTC
I'm so glad you liked it <3 Expect more soonish!

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amarissia November 15 2009, 16:01:53 UTC
AWWW, such a sweet little slice. Thank you.

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freyathedark November 15 2009, 20:16:40 UTC
Heh, can this be counted as a bribe for more Not Wrath? XD

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