Huh. Two entries in one day. I must be sick or something XD
This is just a little drabble I whipped out while RPing, and I hope you like it ^^
Title: Time
Pairing: Angeal/Zack
Rating: G
Summary: Movie nights were special.
Notes: This is unbeta'd, so please tell me if there are any mistakes ^^
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Angeal and Zack loved watching movies together. )
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Adored this bit:
And if halfway through the movie they would shift so Angeal was holding Zack and Zack was only pretending to watch the movie instead of Angeal, neither would say anything. And if Zack pretended to fall asleep so Angeal would kiss his head softly and whisper something that sounded suspiciously like, "I love you," neither would say anything about that either.
The last line made me sad though. Considering what happens. ;_; Back, angsty thoughts! *shooes them away* They have all the time in our world, anyway. *sniff* I think if the last line was in past tense it might flow just a little better since the whole thing is in past tense, right. Unless you intended it to be like that in which case, totally ignore me. XD
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*re-reads* Huh. You're right, it would flow better that way ^^ Shall change it straightaway, and thanks for letting me know <3
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Awww, *huggles back*~ Anytime <3
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So sweet! I love fics that just have those happy little moments. Thank you for sharing this. <3
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