I am so NOT going to do this entire fic in little preview-y snippets on my main journal. No, really. I will have it written, coherently and with some sort of chronology, on my fic journal. HOWEVER. I would appreciate some feedback.
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This snippet's from Arthur's POV. )
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I agree with itachi in that the concept for having little Arthur interludes sounds like a good idea, but making them really separate from the rest. Parentheses or italics or something would be great.
AUGH KEEP GOING. &hearts
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Would mixing the Arthur pov in with the Merlin pov cause some stylistic problem for you? I'll admit I haven't thought about it before, but I'm pretty sure I tend to assume that the most consistent pov is generally the dominant one. Would having occasional moments of Arthur-ness tip the balance too much, do you think? Or is it more it just seems weird to throw Arthur in when most of the rest of the story is so clearly from Merlin's perspective?
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