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BUILDING STONE ANCHORS//HAEHYUK

Aug 01, 2009 11:36

READ: read 'smashing glass bridges' (above) first, and if you really need more angst, then read this.

BUILDING STONE ANCHORS
Donghae/Hyukjae, Rated R, Drama, 3000+
Notes: Smashing Glass Bridges practically wrote itself. This one, not so much. I HATE this, but school starts next week so I just wanted to get this out as fast as I could.

( Donghae knew this was wrong, but every time Hyukjae didn't push him away, it became harder for him to resist. )

character: donghae, character: eunhyuk

Comments 37

inuvampy August 7 2009, 21:24:35 UTC

BULLSHIT D:

I wrote out this long comment for you and then... Omg. Fuck you too LJ >:| *spits on it*

*sits there and broods*

Well I can't relay back word for word what I said, but I'll try my best...

Donghae and Eunhyuk are both so stupid, but then again so is love yes? ;D

I really enjoyed this, more than you know. It made lots of things from the pervious one make a lot more sense. ♥

The way you left it off calls for a sequel though ;D You know it does! Don't deny it! *whip crack*

I'm definatly adding this to my memories~ ♥

Keep up the fantastic work! I look forward to more from you~ ♥

*snuggles to the floor*

freshandhot August 7 2009, 21:51:04 UTC

I know how you feel. D: LJ was being cruel and stupid the entire day to me.

lol I’m glad it cleared things up. Everyone from the last story was calling Donghae an asshole; hopefully he doesn’t come across as one now. I actually feel more sympathetic for Donghae's situation... ._.

But a SEQUEL? Everybody was like: there better be a happy ending, so I made Hae’s pov lighter and less angsty than Hyuk’s. Isn’t that enough to constitute as a “happy ending”? D:

It’s tempting though...

Thank you for the mem~! (And I look forward to YOUR fic, coughcough)

inuvampy August 8 2009, 06:53:15 UTC

Yeah, I actually feel bad for both of them xD; *snuggles them to her bosom*

You don't have to write a sequel if you don't want to ♥ It's just... you know... one of those stories that is so wonderfully constructed and put together, and you are so drawn in that you just don't want it to end xD? *loves all over your fics*

Temptation always wins >:D

You are welcome ;D (Oh god I know D: It takes me so long to write though... I have no clue how everyone else writes so fast... I am amazed. Really xD ♥)

ageneshi August 8 2009, 13:46:57 UTC

Gaaaaaah, why are you not pleased with this? I LOVE THIS SO MUCH! ToT
It was beautifully written. ♥♥♥

freshandhot August 8 2009, 15:56:19 UTC

Well, compared to 'smashing glass bridges' this one didn't flow as well, and parts of this had to be forced out, you know? But as long as the readers like it, it's all good. ♥

ageneshi August 8 2009, 16:03:21 UTC

ToT

I haven't read that. *goes off to read*

I memmed this. <333

freshandhot August 8 2009, 16:36:20 UTC

Ohh, that one is so much more angsty than this one.
Thank you for the mem~! ♥

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freshandhot August 10 2009, 16:27:41 UTC

thank you. glad you liked it.

loveslipped August 10 2009, 03:28:45 UTC

I liked this just as much as Smashing Glass Bridges~

The change of POV was nice. Donghae was going in circles with his girlfriends but Hyukjae is in the middle of that circle.

You're definitely one of my favorite Eunhae writers now :)

freshandhot August 10 2009, 16:29:20 UTC

♥♥♥♥♥ glad you liked it :)
(personally, i like 'smashing' better)

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freshandhot August 10 2009, 17:03:29 UTC

whether they end up or not is left to the reader. :) thanks for reading.