JuNoWriMo 2008, part one.

[freosan]

Yay I am doing it! This part: 2,209 words. So far: 2,209/50,000.

I am so behind.Ever been on a bombing run? No picnic, let me tell you. For one thing it’s always at like oh-two-hundred hours, and for another there’s freaking terrorists with antiaircraft fire underneath you. Let me paint you a picture: it’s dark, it’s cold, you’re ten

Comments

[roguefairy13]

You know I love these people, and I love anything from Tatsu's perspective. he's amazing and I love the way he thinks. Nice little addition having it be from Keuh's perspective too. Can't wait to read the rest love.

[skysailor]

So one can do a switching-POV first person without it being too disorienting. Nice to know.