fic: Spinning in devil's grip

Jan 15, 2010 04:10

Title: Spinning in devil's grip
Author: frenhu
Fandom: Criminal Minds
Pairing: Emily Prentiss/Jennifer Jareau
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: No, they are not mine….“Criminal Minds” belongs to CBS.
Summary: You wish you could have stayed that night, figuring out what that meant for both of you.
Authors Note: Here it comes, the sequel to the sequel of the sequel ( Read more... )

fandom: criminal minds, pairing: emily/jj, fanfiction

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carlyisnot January 15 2010, 03:18:06 UTC
Don;t apologise, i think it's a perfect ending! I'm thrilled with it! It;s realistic and powerful, and it;s a good thing to see Emily so strong. Can;t help but feel a glimmer of happiness that JJ got a taste of her own medicine too.

Really liked Garcia in this part also, I just wanna hug her, she is the worlds best best friend isn't she?

Anyway, definatley nothing to apologise for! the end is perfect, much better than a typical happy ending. I for one love it! Good for Emily. JJ really made her choices and now she has to live with it.

Great work as always xxooxxoox

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frenhu January 17 2010, 12:43:57 UTC
Yeah, I think this would be realistic in real life and I definitely like strong!Emily :)

*glares at your icon, melting away*

Aaaanyway, thanks for the support and telling me not to change the ending. Love ya!

Hugs

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iamlys January 15 2010, 04:05:03 UTC
I love it too!

This happens in real life and that's the best thing about this short series: everything is raw. Readers can totally relate with the characters which makes you an awesome writer :D

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frenhu January 17 2010, 12:12:50 UTC
Aww, blushing all the way! Thanks :)

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mozzdi January 15 2010, 05:00:41 UTC
Wow, I wasn't expecting that ending! And it seems JJ may have woken up to herself but there you go. Great writing again. Keep writing these two because I like reading your stories.

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frenhu January 17 2010, 12:15:12 UTC
I'm glad the end was not foreseen :) Thanks for the compliments!

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malexfaith January 15 2010, 07:37:04 UTC
omg, this is awesome. Beyond awesome. So raw, so passionate, so powerful. God damn this is amazing. I cant wait for the sequal to this. Its definitely a favourite series of mine, as always thanks heaps for sharing

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frenhu January 17 2010, 12:16:49 UTC
I'm afraid there won't be any sequel to this because this happened to be the ending what I could live with :) Oh, one of your favourite series? I'm honored!

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the_dark_zodiac January 15 2010, 09:43:39 UTC
*punches the air*

Yes. Great, really great.

Emily serves up revenge cold. After all they say revenge is a dish best served cold.

tdz.

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frenhu January 17 2010, 12:18:24 UTC
Emily just took back what she needed in order to survive. Revenge seemed the best solution here, don't you agree? :)

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