Words Should Be Illegal

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Words Should Be Illegal // Jonghyun/Onew Fluff // R (for sexual themes)
Jonghyun doesn't know how to express his feelings to Jinki. Words just aren't enough.  Prequel: Pink Roses Sequel: Telling a Lie
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OMGYOUSDFJDFL

[mountpurple]

THIS WAS SO BEAUTIFUL. AND LIKE THE WORDS AND THE DESCRIPTIONS AND KDJFHKSJ HOLY POO, I JUST WANNA QUOTE EVERYTHING.

be back to leave another longer and incoherent comment later ;__; bb ♥

Re: OMGYOUSDFJDFL

[frenchtoast]

Awwww, thanks. You don't have to quote anything, the keysmash made me :D face already ♥

But what is that ;__; face? :(

Re: OMGYOUSDFJDFL

[mountpurple]

;_; <-- da crying/sobbing face

I'd visit a museum every day from opening til closing to watch you warm the souls of others like you do mine and to see if I can catch an utterance of your attraction in my hand.
;A; /heartache.

Our love ought to be illegal because anything that makes you feel higher than the sun isn't possibly good for you.
sjkdfhjdsfk just. take me away. ugh ♥

Because in my opinion, pressing a sweet kiss to your lips as we cuddle in the afterglow and saying 'I love you' doesn't translate to 'I'll love you and only you til the day I die and into the afterlife. Say you'll share that feeling with me, Jinki.'
i cry ;_; CUZ ITS SO BEAUTIFUL AND ROMANTIC.

You're beautiful. You're amazing. You're priceless

this is like fantastic (elastic), like i love how it's almost an obsession for jjong, he needs dubu, or else he'd die. i love the desperation behind their love. my otp is so beautiful. and youre amazing and beautiful ♥ for writing and sharing /squishes forever.

memming ♥♥♥

Re: OMGYOUSDFJDFL

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jongyu always strikes me as an emotion heavy pairing therefore there is poetic sap.

And lol, I know what the ;_; face is~ I was wondering why it was there but I got it now. I'm happy you enjoyed this expression of our beautiful otp. Thank you for reading/commenting. ♥♥

[life_not_knife]

Wow this was so beautiful, so sweet and sensual all at once. I love how it is written in Jonghyun's thoughts but we still get to see Jinki's personality too.. and even though it doesn't go into specific detail in the form of dialogue, it just works so perfectly. I absolutely love this, you have good reason to have liked this when you were writing it...and you still should.

Such a great piece of writing :D.

XxxxX Thanks for sharing this :)

[frenchtoast]

I was afraid the dialogue would take away from Jonghyun's thoughts but it's nice to know otherwise. I'm glad you like it.

Thanks for reading :D

[jinkibumiminho]

Sweet Siwon on a stick, this is beautiful, just gorgeous. My mind of course, is picturing them between the sheets, but there is no smut here. What a feat!

I think you had Jjong express what every fan suffering from Onew Ache feels/experiences, so thanks for that.

This is the best I can do right now, because you've left me a little brain-dead and after-glowy.

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omg, Jonghyun is totally suffering from Onew Ache here. /didn't notice

Thanks for reading :D

[volatileflame]

this was simply beautiful <3

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Thanks! :)

[playingods]

this is so beautifully gorgeous!!!! ;_______; ♥

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Glad you think so. Thanks for reading. :D