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frenchtoast

Cleansing

Mar 24, 2011 21:02

Cleansing // No Pairing (unless you want to squint)
Slavery (but not really) AU // PG-13
In that place, Jinki and Kibum were only numbers and things to be sold with just enough luck to escape death.
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titanic: none, au, ○cleansing, rating: pg13, x.shinee, genre: dark, length: oneshot

Comments 8

yunho March 25 2011, 02:11:27 UTC

Omg, this fic was seriously amazing \o/ I loved this, your way of incorporating all the prompts was so creative and spot on just, wow seriously, this was so, so good!

Best of luck to you in the challenge!

frenchtoast March 25 2011, 05:13:39 UTC

Really? I was afraid it was confusing. But I'm glad you enjoyed it anyway.

Thank you!

intoxicatedbrat March 25 2011, 06:33:30 UTC

Wow. This. I'm so glad I clicked on the link.

This is wonderfully written. I really enjoyed this. I love every part of it, the plot, the way you tell the story, how Jinki's feelings and emotions are just so vivid, I can actually feel it. There's nothing for me to nitpick, it's that wondrous. ^__^ I like your choice of words and your descriptions too.

I just. Wow. Pretty speechless keke I'll just keep this in my Mems ok? Looking forward to more of your work!
All the best for the challenge!

frenchtoast March 26 2011, 03:26:14 UTC

Your words. ;~; They've made my day. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I was afraid the whole thing was too wordy (and horrid in general) but I guess it's alright.

Anyway, thank you for this lovely comment and thanks for reading.

pinkbiohazard March 25 2011, 12:26:36 UTC

WOW. This is amazingly written.

frenchtoast March 26 2011, 00:43:30 UTC

Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it.

fmaexpert April 19 2012, 03:15:30 UTC

I never told you, but this is one of my favs of yours. idk why i'm commenting this late at night when i should be finishing bio study guide or else i fail.

and i see your run on sentences lol. but yours make sense. mine don't. and mine are longer then yours. and you edit. something i don't do. so theres like... grammar mistakes all over my paper lol. darn you and your mannerisms rubbing off on me. stupid buffalo :P (jk~)

frenchtoast April 24 2012, 02:08:44 UTC

lol imma need you to gtfo my livejournal you hippopotame~ but thanks <3 and work on yo grammar/run on skills.

i'm angry i was like '??? omg who the eff is commenting i haven't posted in eleventy days *sees username* ...Oh... lolherLJisthesameaseverythingelse ><'