A Poem

[frenchie72]

I know i haven't posted any poems in a long time, so i thought I might as well. please keep in mind that this is a very, very rough draft and unlike most poems i would ever write. criticism is welcome and would be greatly appreciated.

Comments

[odetolove]

One word: Adagio.

[odetolove]

p.s. now I mean this in no way a hint of doubt of your writing prowess...but, erm, is there any chance Nupur has gotten a hold of your lj again? Just asking because of the past entry, not because I doubt you, I promise.

[no_facades]

Yea, this is definitely by Nupur

[no_facades]

Megan doesn't write like that.
haha

[thestarshines]

Omg!! I loooove it! Whoever wrote it: publish it!