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fremi08

Collision chapter 8/?

Mar 11, 2013 11:51

Chapter 8

Luke reacted first. He stood up and approached the couple and stuck out his hand. “Mr. and Mrs. Jackson. How are you?”

Mr. Jackson gripped his hand first and shook it firmly. “Considering the circumstances, we’re okay, Mr. Snyder.”

“Please, call me Luke.” Luke pleaded.

Mr. Jackson nodded and let go of Luke’s hand. Luke turned to his ( Read more... )

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Comments 24

halestorm1 March 11 2013, 11:44:14 UTC

Yay...good times are coming up =)...finally they can act on their feelings towards each other, at least for now =).

Thanks, cant´t wait for the next chapter!

fremi08 March 12 2013, 13:03:21 UTC

Something is definitely coming up ;-)...

Thanks for reading and commenting!

hopperl March 11 2013, 14:16:24 UTC

What an amazing chapter. It is hard to think of what a sad and lonely life that Luke has lead up to this point in his life. All the weight and pressure of being a celebrity and a star athlete is enough to drive a person crazy and then to top off not being able to give and feel the love you so desperately need and want.... Let's hope he lets Reid help him.

Loving the hot make out scene. He thought kissing was great, that's just the appetizer. :) Can't wait for more.

fremi08 March 12 2013, 13:06:48 UTC

Thank you! Yes, Luke has been very lonely and he really wants someone special in his life. But it's difficult with him being a celebrity and all. He's trying though.

tldreamer March 11 2013, 15:15:53 UTC

Glad Luke isn't holding back with Reid.

fremi08 March 12 2013, 13:07:27 UTC

Me too :-).

Thanks!

amyafa March 11 2013, 15:23:23 UTC

What a great chapter. Thank you.

I love that Luke took the first step. I'm so glad that Luke is honest with Reid.
I'm a bit worried about what Kevin is going to say when he wakes up.

I hope Luke can choose when he comes out in public.
That doesn't mean he can't be with Reid in privet tough.

fremi08 March 12 2013, 13:17:39 UTC

I think it's important that is was Luke who took the first step. But it's just the first step, there a long road to go.

Thank you!

moerlin March 11 2013, 18:49:54 UTC

Now we're getting somewhere! ;) Nice role reversal from canon with the first kiss.

And I had a feeling Kevin's parents wouldn't be an issue, but of course that could still pop up. My money's on there being a very confused and jealous Kevin once he wakes up and finds out, though.

Can't wait to see!

fremi08 March 12 2013, 13:18:55 UTC

Thanks! I like to use some canon here and there and mix it up a little.

Thank you!