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[freezing_heart]

Title: Blind
Pairing: Soohyun/Eli
Genre: Angst
Rating: PG-13
Chapter: 1/?
Summary: Soohyun and Eli are best friends. Eli’s got a girlfriend. They all live happily...ok, maybe not all of them, but the point is that happiness doesn’t last forever...
Warning: English is not my first language.
Disclaimer: Soohyun’s my lover and Eli’s my slave...just kidding

Comments

[nikipiyoko]

I find this story interesting :D
Poor Soohyun though.
And I really wanna know what's going to happen to Eli... uwah... is he going to be involved in some kind of accident?
You could use to editing to the dialoge so it would be easier to read though... but apart from that, it's a great story! :D <3

Don't worry... I can be your friend ~

[freezing_heart]

I'm happy you liked the story 8)
Yeah, poor Soohyun...but Eli will join him in suffering(though for a different reason).
I think I'm a sadist lol
Editing the dialogue - you mean using dashes?
Thanks for the advice^^
So can I add you as a friend?:D

[nikipiyoko]

:D
Oh really now? Haha I know the feeling XD
Ah... just divide some pharagraph and stuff... it makes the dialoge more neat if you have one line for each senctence when they talk to eachother... and it gives a better flow to the text :D <3
You're welcome :D <3
Sure thing you can :D <3
I read your other fanfic too... god so heartwrenching,I wanna read more! :D

[freezing_heart]

Oh, so you read the other one too^^ It seems I just have to have some drama in my fics *grins*
And I update it more frequently than Blind~
I'm glad you like both of them my dear <3