Fic: Of Recoil and Grace; everyone; PG-13 (1/4)

[kepp0xy]

Title: Of Recoil and Grace
Author: kepp0xy
Pairings/characters: Arthur, Merlin, Gwen, Morgana, Uther, Morgause, Mordred, Lancelot, Leon, Freya, Gaius, Igraine. Central pairing is Arthur/Gwen, with numerous shades of multiple others.
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: ~27 K
Warnings: Character death. Some dark themes. Fiddle-fooling with Arthurian legends. Working

Comments

[timeblind]

Well, I kinda flailed at you while you were still online. Here's a little more flailage:

- Merlin channeling the Weasley twins re: apparition = ♥

- Arthur beckoned a page to his side, saying, "Tell Queen Guinevere..." Gave me a feeling of glee to read Queen Guinevere! :D :D :D

[kepp0xy]

eeeeeeeee! I'm always down for your flailing, vikkilikkingdonpants ;D ♥!

And muahaha. I can't even imagine how things would go if Merls were to meet the Weasley's.... @_@

Queen Guinevere. Plz, show, let that day come. *_*

[genstarwen92]

*BOUNCES* This is absolutly stunning so far!!!

and GUH these lines are just...I can't even...:

'Except, he could not ignore the weight low in his stomach. There was so much to do with the dawn.'

'Remember all we've done," Merlin interrupted Arthur. "And the future you imagine. The one you've told me of.'

...'Everything is about to change," he breathed, meeting Arthur's eye without wavering.

They stared at one another, the pause lengthening ...

Then Arthur stepped aside.'

'Yet the weight of secrecy suddenly feels as heavy on his chest as though Camelot itself had settled there and the compulsion to talk is overwhelming.

"I loved them all," he croaks. "I loved you." Because it is true.'

SO MUCH DEPTH IN YOUR SENTENCES!.<333

Reads on...

[kepp0xy]

Ahhh, thank you so much for this! It's such a kind comment and absolutely made my morning, so thank you again <3

And also: your icon is fantastic :DD!

[nurse_stiney]

Ok, so forgive me for taking so long to finally sit down and read your no-doubt-will-absolutely-be-amazing Merlin saga here. :P But I am reading it now, and so far it is GLORIOUS! You describe just enough to make me squee, but leave out just enough to make me go O.O at all the implications. :P
::off to read the rest!::

[kepp0xy]

Ahhhh. Late response is inexcusably late, but thank you so much for reading and taking the time to comment! I'm glad you enjoyed this first part :D!

[yalegirl03]

Excellent beginning. I have to go on to part two when I am home and not at work wasting time :( Well done!

[kepp0xy]

hahahaha I hope your day at work progresses smoothly ;)

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment! Super glad you've been enjoying what you've read so far :D