Comments | freemurmurs: Ride

kepp0xy in freemurmurs

Ride

Jun 16, 2007 21:12

Head banging from side-to-side, hitting the constraints painfully, his stomach dropped with each sweeping dive. The climb was the worst part because they stopped halfway up; relishing like perverse torturers as the people simmered in fearful anticipation of the upcoming plunge.

Wobbly, Dean stepped off the roller coaster, he looked at his ( Read more... )

spn: teen!chesters, supernatural, type: gen, length: drabble, spn: dean

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kepp0xy June 20 2007, 22:51:03 UTC

thanks! ♥

tsuki_no_bara June 17 2007, 05:49:55 UTC

on the one hand, kind of sad that it's his first rollercoaster, but on the other, i love that he's so excited about it. wheeeeee!

girlfan1979 June 19 2007, 23:08:50 UTC

Good review: exactly what I wanted to say.

Very Dean.

kepp0xy June 21 2007, 04:57:43 UTC

thanks so much! It's what I was going for, that bittersweet kinda feel, so I'm super glad that it came across =D

kepp0xy June 21 2007, 04:54:05 UTC

haha it's bittersweet; exactly what i was going for. Super glad to know it came across. Thanks for reading!

ellipsisblack June 18 2007, 08:28:42 UTC

Haha, that is cool. Go Dean!

kepp0xy June 21 2007, 04:58:06 UTC

haha ♥

ewanspotter June 20 2007, 06:25:39 UTC

Awww, Deano. :D

kepp0xy June 21 2007, 04:59:53 UTC

*L* he's a cutie. ♥

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kepp0xy June 22 2007, 05:23:06 UTC

LOL *whispers* I actually took some of the inspiration of it from our excursion on that roller coaster *L* hehe