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Fic: Baths and Accidents, Gwen/Arthur, PG

Dec 19, 2009 20:52

Title: Baths and Accidents
Author: kepp0xy
Characters/Pairings: Gwen/Arthur
Rating: PG, humour, UST
Spoilers/Warnings: None
Summary: Merlin is sick, so Gwen offers to help with his duties, like drawing baths for prince's prone to walking around in only a towel...

A/N: Inspired by this thread in a camelot_love discussion post. Posted it first here and am now posting ( Read more... )

type: crack, merlin: gwen, type: het, merlin: pairing - gwen/arthur, length: ficlet, merlin: arthur

Comments 10

mancalahour December 20 2009, 05:20:29 UTC

Oh. My Jesus. HOW DID I MISS THIS THE FIRST TIME?

THIS IS THE BEST THING EVER. You know, this and everything else I've ever read of yours and then said 'THIS IS THE BEST THING EVER'.

Okay. Okay. Bits I liked most:

"Merlin's sick," she said in a very small voice. "I offered to help with some of his tasks. Like this -" she flailed a hand towards the water. "I hope it's hot enough for you."

A brief pause.

"The bath, that is."

LOL! That is so perfect. I can just see it in my brain.

But Gwen blamed him - it was he who had kept her pinned against a pillar yesterday for longer than was strictly necessary, meaning the feel of his mouth on her neck and the press of his body against hers were memories fresh in her mind.

And with that thought, the slight mark he left on her shoulder just beneath her dress line seemed to flare up.

Uh. The hottest thing ever? Y/MFY? I want that scene.

I ♥ you. Never leave me.

kepp0xy December 20 2009, 20:39:42 UTC

♥ Thank you for this comment! And bwahaha! This was a lot of fun to write, actually. I hardly ever do flash in the pan style snippets of flirty, UST for these two, but they're so adorkable I think I ought to try more.

AND AS IF I COULD EVER LEAVE YOU. WHAT INSANITY. ♥

loveandthetruth December 20 2009, 10:41:29 UTC

"Yes," he said, and, neutrality suddenly lost, in that one syllable

Oh.

Wow.

*fails at coherency*

kepp0xy December 20 2009, 20:39:53 UTC

=]!

misseri44 December 30 2009, 12:47:02 UTC

But Gwen blamed him - it was he who had kept her pinned against a pillar yesterday for longer than was strictly necessary, meaning the feel of his mouth on her neck and the press of his body against hers were memories fresh in her mind.

And with that thought, the slight mark he left on her shoulder just beneath her dress line seemed to flare up.

This so needs to happen!!! How could i miss this fic??? I guess after their encounter both of them need a cold bath rather than a hot one, poor Gwen, always in the hardest situations :D

kepp0xy January 8 2010, 01:51:01 UTC

Sorry for the late response, bb! I'm so glad you enjoyed this - and yes, certainly Arthur is wishing the bath were cool now *L* ♥

misseri44 January 8 2010, 12:09:42 UTC

Yeah!! A fic about that would be cool, featuring Gwen and Arthur after this meeting and seeing their reactions :DD

til_tomorrow January 6 2010, 06:04:53 UTC

This made me laugh because this is so THEM.
Ah seriously, I want to see this in S3.
We already know Arthur likes his baths.

kepp0xy January 8 2010, 01:51:45 UTC

*L* I do imagine the number of accidental and awkward situations they'll get themselves in to will be plenty. So glad you enjoyed ♥!

zar33n January 18 2010, 19:47:14 UTC

That was delicious to read!! I liked the bit where Arthur is looking adoringly instead of perverted and it's Gwen that is thinking of bad thoughts. I mean, who wouldn't if Arthur is clad is nothing but a towel?!