SGA Progression Series: A Curiousity 2/5

[kepp0xy]

She had been walking slowly down a hall of Atlantis, exploring.  It was most... incredible.

Her people were settling as best they could.  But they missed Athos very dearly. She, too, shared the ache of missing the trees, the lake near her own tent.  She missed knowing the paths, and knowing which star to follow if she lost the path.  She

Comments

[tielan]

A lovely little story - I particularly liked Teyla's thoughts on the city - and a nice exchange between John and Teyla.

[kepp0xy]

thank you! She had a huuuuuge leap to make from open, forest village to indoors, floating city. XDD I was a bit worried about keeping John IC o_O so I'm glad it worked for you. And thanks for the concrit! I'll keep what you said mind for next time =D

[red_ajah]

How sweet ^_^ Short and lovely indeed ^^

[kepp0xy]

thanks =D

[nath_42]

Good ! I like the "I already know your answer" and Sheppard trademark smile... sweet !

[kepp0xy]

thank you! I wasn't too sure of that line, so I'm really glad it worked XD