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Fic: Camelot Enterprises 4/4: Darts of Pleasure, Arthur/Gwen, 14A

Apr 01, 2009 20:22

Title: Camelot Enterprises 4/4: Darts of Pleasure
Author: kepp0xy
Rating: 14A
Characters/Pairing: Gwen/Arthur
Warning: Some discussion and thought about explicit goings on.
Summary: Gwen wakes up on a Saturday morning.

Author's Notes: This is a cracky AU in which Camelot is a computer business owned by Uther Pendragon. Arthur Pendragon is a Junior ( Read more... )

merlin: gwen, merlin: pairing - gwen/arthur, merlin: arthur, type: au, merlin, type: het, series: camelot enterprises (merlin), length: ficlet

Comments 14

ruby_caspar April 2 2009, 08:53:18 UTC

Ohmygod ohmygod ohmygod... sorry, but it has to be said - squeeeeee!! I've been waiting for this part since part 3 and it definitely didn't disappoint. I loved that you told it from the morning after perspective, and I thought the way the behaved around each other was so so sweet and real. All the flashbacks were well-placed and so sensual, and the end was absolutely perfect!

I know this technically 4/4, but I hope you're planning on writing more for this AU, because I love it!

kepp0xy April 8 2009, 05:33:28 UTC

Thank you! I wasn't entirely certain that this concept would be easily swallowed ... If people didn't buy that Gwen could give in like that, then the whole thing would be a hopeless nonstarter. It's a relief to know this worked out for you :D

=/ tater_mae & I both like playing in this 'verse, but I don't have any fics set in it that I'm necessarily planning on posting right now. Maybe at some point, if poignant inspiration strikes!

Cheers & thanks again!

crayford April 7 2009, 23:55:59 UTC

Yeah! I liked this "series"

I've not read a proper AU Merlin fic before. It's so common in Twilight fan Fiction.

I like the Arwen interaction in the last part.

I like that you put pieces of the couples night together as "flashback(?)". It's very effective.

kepp0xy June 11 2009, 04:58:16 UTC

Thank you! And sorry for the long delay in responding to your lovely comment :]

sheppardspie4te June 1 2009, 17:21:01 UTC

I loved that last sentence it sent shivers up my spine!

kepp0xy June 11 2009, 04:58:28 UTC

Thanks :]

janjelicab June 11 2009, 01:48:34 UTC

I love this series!! Absolutely Awesome :>

...Do you have any plans to continue or do a sequel....

Anyway!! Awesome!!

kepp0xy June 11 2009, 04:59:47 UTC

Thank you! As for continuing or sequel-ing, tater_mae and I have played a lot in this 'verse, but I'm not sure that there's any pieces I feel like posting at the moment. Perhaps sometime in the future :]

historyfanatic September 14 2009, 00:16:17 UTC

This is totally awesome! I just love these two!

kepp0xy September 15 2009, 00:28:32 UTC

Thank you so much! :]!