[FIC]Reaching for Happiness, Jared/Jensen (7/?)

[freedomthisway]

Here is chapter 7. I posted two chapter in a row today as my apology for the long delay of update. Please comment if you like it. Comments really make my day. xD Thanks for reading!

Author:freedomthisway

Character: Jared, Jensen, JDM, Mike Rosenbaum, Tom Welling.

Category: Angst, Romance, Drama, H/C

Warning: Rape/Non-con, underage, Jensen/OMC

Rating: PG-13

Comments

[indusnm]

Poor Jensen! Hopefully it all comes out, but not too soon for the angst...
Thanks for posting!

[freedomthisway]

Thanks! :D

I do plan just like that. *wink*

Thanks for reading... ^_____________^

Constructive Criticism

[yaoi_rocks]

Please try to make your chapters longer - or at the very least, make something actually happen in them. It has taken about 5 chapters to just get Jensen into the house and ready to speak to Jared. Nice slow burners are great - but too slow and the fire goes out and people lose interest.

Sorry, I hope that doesn't come across harsh - but I like this story and don't want to be put off by lack of progress.

Re: Constructive Criticism

[freedomthisway]

I know this kind of comment is bound to happen sooner or later. I too realize that my story development is very slow. And my only defense is because I want to make every feelings and memories and situations clear and laid bare for the readers to see before I finally put them together in a room. But I guess need to apologize to string all of you this long. *______________*

Actually, I finished chapter 8 sometime before, and I've sent it to my beta-reader.

I promise that as soon as she finish beta-ing it, I'll post it. And I promise you, in the next chapter, something will FINALLY happen because they both finally will talk to each other. :D

I'm sorry once again and thank you for putting up with me for this long. ^_____^

Thanks for the critics! xD

[tennousei]

Hei, it is one nice and pretty much interesting story

[freedomthisway]

I know this kind of comment is bound to happen sooner or later. I too realize that my story development is very slow. And my only defense is because I want to make every feelings and memories and situations clear and laid bare for the readers to see before I finally put them together in a room. But I guess need to apologize to string all of you this long. *______________*

Actually, I finished chapter 8 sometime before, and I've sent it to my beta-reader.

I promise that as soon as she finish beta-ing it, I'll post it. And I promise you, in the next chapter, something will FINALLY happen because they both finally will talk to each other. :D

I'm sorry once again and thank you for putting up with me for this long. ^_____^

Thanks for reading and commenting! xD

[mre_quecky]

Woah, I'm so so curious how that will turn out! I'm so frightened for Jensen...

[freedomthisway]

lol.

Oh, don't be afraid honey.

I won't torture him...much. *grin*

[mre_quecky]

Ah, you're evil, you're at least torturing ME by making me wait for Jensen's torture...

[freedomthisway]

lol

I know and I'm really sorry! xD

I'll post next chapter today and I hope you'll like it. :D

[shelgrainger2]

Jared was so cold at the end there, calling him Mr Ackles. It is a shame he blames Jensen for everything, I just hope he willing to listen to what Jensen has to say and I hope Jensen can make him understand why he left. I am looking forward to seeing how this meeting works out. Post more soon.

[freedomthisway]

Thank you! I'm glad you like these chapters too. ^____^

I promise I'll post next chapter in a day or two after my beta-reader finish beta-ing it. xD