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Roots Run Deep (Four Brothers)

Jan 13, 2009 20:58

Title: Roots Run Deep
Author: mands_angelfox
Pairing/Characters: Bobby
Genre: Angst
Word Count: 1, 184
Rating: PG
Feedback: Feedback? Is love. No. Seriously, it is.
Summary: A few reflections on the events of the movie by Bobby Mercer.
Author's Note: Longtime fan, first time poster. Loved the movie for a long time now and decided it was time to dip my toe in ( Read more... )

angst, four_brothers, bobby_mercer

Comments 10

annemiek81 January 13 2009, 21:10:21 UTC

wow, this brought tears to my eyes, the whole thing was like a poem, like it was meant to flow like that...hope I'm making sense

Thank you so much for sharing

freedom_press January 17 2009, 21:31:08 UTC

It does make sense :)

And thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts, they are very appreciated.

annemiek81 January 13 2009, 21:11:06 UTC

Ok, me again, only now noticed you are listening to Kane! whee! :)
perfect song for this!

freedom_press January 17 2009, 21:31:58 UTC

Heh, yay Kane :) I adored their music!

maxiekatt2 January 13 2009, 22:23:32 UTC

Really well done - you had me choked up by the end. Some beautiful observations into Bobby and how he really lost so much when he lost Jack and Evelyn. Great job.

freedom_press January 17 2009, 21:32:27 UTC

Aw, thank you :) Glad my first attempt at this fanfic wasn't a complete disaster. Thanks for reading and commenting!

maxiekatt2 January 17 2009, 21:34:11 UTC

You're welcome - have you posted it at ff.net? Four Brothers could definitely use a few more good authors over there, lol.

freedom_press January 17 2009, 21:44:20 UTC

I haven't actually. I hadn't even thought about it, lol. I should do that. I used to have an account over there, but it was years ago.

rogue21493 January 16 2009, 21:19:25 UTC

Saw this in the commuinty and here I am! And I gotta say, it was gooooood. Well, better then good! It was awesome! ^_^ I think you got them down with the whole family sense of it being not about blood. Good job!

Can't wait to read more of your stuff!

freedom_press January 17 2009, 21:33:15 UTC

Heh, thank you.

Hopefully I will write something else, lord knows I have a Bobby muse to help me along with it.