"Take A Good Look at My Face, You’ll See My Smile Seems Out of Place"

[free2hate]

Title: "Take A Good Look at My Face, You’ll See My Smile Seems Out of Place"

Author: free2hate

Pairing(s): Adam/Tommy (one-sided)

Word Count: 869

Rating: PG

Warning(s): Swearing, (mild) angst, unrequited love

Summary: Not everyone is meant for fairytale endings.

Disclaimer: I own nothing.

A/N: I’ve never written anything close to angst before, so I

Comments

[thrace_adams]

NOOOOOOO you get my FRED SOBBING icon because NOOOOO so painful...want a happy ending. *stomps foot and pouts*

[free2hate]

hahaha i love you bb, and yeah I kinda really want a happy ending too, i promise i'll write something schmoopy next just for you<3

[thrace_adams]

*giggles* Aww thanks bb :)

[casey270]

you should always let the words take you where they want to go. i love this!

you did angst really, really well.

[free2hate]

thank you so much bb , that means a lot:)

[dangerous_47]

Awww. :((( Ouch.

But well written. :D

[free2hate]

*kisses it better*

thank you bb:)

[masnds2]

Well, ouch, that is going to leave a mark. Poor Tommy...trying to put it out there - how scary is that? And Adam *sighs*...

I'd say you nailed angst pretty darn well....

[free2hate]

Yeah Tommy made a huuuge step putting himself out there, but poos Adam can't be blamed either, he's just oblivious

thank you so much:)

[rboyz]

I agree with the others. You've got angst down pat. Now FIX IT!! LOL! But seriously, as painful as this was, it was also beautifully written. No need to be aggravated. It may not have turned out as you had intended, but it turned out exactly as it was meant to. I could feel every moment, and that's all kinds of perfect. :) <333

[free2hate]

Thank you so much, its such a huge compliment that you felt it, t means so much to me,thank you<33333