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Assumptions part 5

Jan 22, 2007 21:12

Title: Assumptions
Author: fredsmith518
Beta: none!
Rating:tame
Disclaimer: Nothing owned.
Summary: So, as you do, I was wandering through http://community.livejournal.com/oc_plotbunnies/profile looking for a post, which I found btw, and happened across this comment by dogsbody01 one thing lead to ( Read more... )

assumptions

Comments 34

katwoman76 January 22 2007, 21:40:28 UTC

Great update.
The way you describe Ryan's reaction to the list of comments from the Newpsies feels very in character. Some things he can deal with, other really sting. And that for a good reason.

Good from Seth to look out for Ryan. Seth can be so self-absorbed sometimes that it's good to see this side of him. The boys level eachother out in a wonderful way.

Can't wait to read the next chapter to see what Kirsten has planned.
Thanks for updating so soon again. Can I hope you continue in this pace?

fredsmith518 January 22 2007, 22:01:26 UTC

Thank you:)

I'm glad Ryan's various reactions sounded fair.

Seth is trying. So will Kirsten be, next part, I hope tomorrow, but depends on work. I'd like to finish this in a timely fashion:)

elzed January 22 2007, 21:47:47 UTC

Aha. Looking forward to that little convo between the two of them. Good of Seth to notice...

fredsmith518 January 22 2007, 22:02:41 UTC

Thanks:)
Definitely Ryan, Kirsten next. Seth has his moments!

yessi_5 January 22 2007, 21:58:05 UTC

When he arrived, the house was in darkness. Ryan heaved a sigh of relief. Some nights he had to wait for hours for the Cohens to retire to bed before he could start on his round of tasks.

This is just the saddest thing ever. Not just that he thinks he has to do the housework, but that he thinks he has to do them at night, without disturbing the others. I'm so glad that Kirsten is waiting there for him - so hopefully her plan works out, because Ryan certainly can't go on like this.

fredsmith518 January 22 2007, 22:04:12 UTC

Thank you,
no he can't, poor kid, all better soon, in theory!

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fredsmith518 January 22 2007, 22:23:23 UTC

yeah? well it's not written, or even started, but I have thought about it, I'm just waiting to see what will happen when I write it:)I have hopes for tomorrow night.

thank you!

anne35 January 22 2007, 23:16:31 UTC

I was so happy to see you post this today. I was afraid after you were so kind to us yesterday that we wouldn't be seeing this again for a few days.
Such a wonderful update. I really enjoyed hearing Ryan's thoughts. And good for Seth for actually noticing Ryan looking a little worn out. Bad Kandy for not noticing it sooner. My heart broke for poor Ryan as he was trying to subtly get information out of Seth about Kirsten.
Can't wait to read the conversation between Kirsten and Ryan and see what Kirsten has on that sheet of paper.

fredsmith518 January 23 2007, 21:42:48 UTC

Thank you
I really want to finish this quickly, while I can remember all the strands in my head.
I like writing sympathetic Seth, I've decided:) or unconscious Seth, that works too.