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fredsmith518

For cheekymice

Jul 22, 2008 09:01

Title: ?
Author: fredsmith518
Beta: no
Rating:tame
Disclaimer: Nothing owned.
Summary: Drabble, 700ish words. More explanation at the end.( Read more... )

drabbles

Comments 49

helen_c July 22 2008, 08:30:15 UTC

Heee. Nice! :)

fredsmith518 July 22 2008, 08:31:26 UTC

thank you:)

fifimom July 22 2008, 10:08:21 UTC

He felt his heart jump, his stomach roil and his mouth dry: his legs turned to jelly and he had to lean against the wall. What the hell?
“Really, Sandy, it’s okay. Thanks for caring so much about me, Kirsten.”
It's nice to read how much all the Cohens care about Ryan.
I know Cheeky is going to love this, I do too.
And now I feel the need to go read the Accidental Hero again.
Thanks for writing and sharing.

fredsmith518 July 22 2008, 10:10:21 UTC

Thank you

And now I feel the need to go read the Accidental Hero again. I thought that might happen:)

I have a very soft spot for that fic, see the dedication on chp 1, beams.

zbyszko July 22 2008, 15:00:08 UTC

You made me go reread The Accidental Hero too now. Although since I got up early, it gave me something to do and anyway even if I hadn't, the yard guys were doing the condo lawns at an ungodly hour this morning......

fredsmith518 July 22 2008, 20:32:24 UTC

I re read too:)

kazfloyd July 22 2008, 10:53:46 UTC

Very nice. Love the line about Kirsten caring so much about him.

fredsmith518 July 22 2008, 12:09:46 UTC

Thank you, I love Kirsten caring, there's a shock;)

finlee July 22 2008, 11:59:51 UTC

Really awesome! I kind of figured what was going on but it was great seeing Seth stressing out and wanting to come to Ryan's defense. I wonder if he got away before he had to do heavy lifting?

fredsmith518 July 22 2008, 12:11:30 UTC

Thank you
I'm glad you figured it out, actually, that Seth's pov was clear, I tried to make it ambiguous at the beginning, sure, but I didn't want it to tip into 'no identifiable voice'.

jassylou July 22 2008, 12:15:28 UTC

Should I be saying sorry for finding this "hilarious"?.(g)

With lines like these!

(And before you suggest it again, Ryan, you are not some sort of ‘early warning system, first line of defense.’”)(Typical Ryan)

(Man! Seth needed to back-pedal faster. The whole situation was way out of control.)(definitely typical Seth)

I'm sat next to an open window and I can see the neighbours looking to see where the gails of laughter are coming from.LOL.

It's adorable fred and I'm sure cheeky will be laughing as well.

Get well soon cheeky! Cheers fred.(g) XD

fredsmith518 July 22 2008, 12:17:32 UTC

Thank you
yes, it was supposed to be funny:D
delighted it made you smile