Working on a Case, chapter 14: Flight Paths

[freddylloyd]

Characters: Titans as of the end of the Family Lost paperback, starting with Bart Allen (Kid Flash) and Tim Drake (Robin). This installment also includes Cassie Sandsmark (Wonder Girl) and Koriand’r (Starfire).
Rating: PG.
Content: Mystery with comic relief, or perhaps comedy with mystery relief.
Word Count: about 1,200 words per chapter. Unknown

Comments

[ladymirth]

This is really excellent! You've got all the characters down note-perfect, and being told from Bart's POV is at once hilarious and facsinating. This is how Kid Flash should have been written - even with all the book-learning, he is still very much the Impulse we loved. And I absolutely love how well you showcase Tim's smarts and pre-OYL adorableness. I'd almost forgotten the non-condescending patience with his teammates that made him such a great leader.

I do pity those men, though. I bet if I was a straight guy I'd have a hard time not focusing on Kory's impressive boobage. They're just lucky it wasn't Peej. *g*

Are you doing this for NaNo? Will look forward to updates!

[freddylloyd]

Thanks for your kind words. I'm not doing NaNoWriMo, but I'm trying to make it inspiration for more daily production. I have other projects and deadlines, so my productivity on this particular story will probably appear to falter soon. But hopefully I'll still be writing!

My impression of Tim Drake is that he's very fond of his Young Justice friends, and also very fond of being one of the smartest people in the room, so helping Bart think through stuff is doubly rewarding for him.

I'm pleased you got what was afflicting the air traffic men, even if Kory and Bart-two of the Titans' innocents-didn't. Thanks again!

[hamartian]

Wow! This is great! You can really feel all the characters popping off the page. (well, screen)