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Sweeter than all the girls

Feb 27, 2011 00:22

Title: Sweeter than all the girls
Author: littlesumo
Rating: PG
Pairing: Dan/Nando
Disclaimer: This is fiction.
A/N: AU. For tetila who wanted one of them to be the celebrity and the other a groupie.
Those two, always do they have to develop feelings, so the planned PWP fell through and I'm not exactly satisfied with the outcome. I like the idea though, enough to most ( Read more... )

nina, nando, football rps, slash, dan

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vicky86x February 26 2011, 23:40:20 UTC

awww this is so sweet ;)

these two just have to have feelings for each other, I just can't imagine them to "just have sex" ^^
but you could definitely write a slashy prequel, these two on a beach, that actually has some potential :P

Oh and I like the fact that Dan doesn't know Fernando's name until the last scene, it's a sweet detail :)

and I LOVE your icon, really sexy legs ^^

littlesumo February 27 2011, 00:05:54 UTC

Thank you :)

Yes I know, but couldn't they have feelings AND sex? :)
And a prequel comes before the story ;), but I might actually write them in Australia. I'll make even less promises on that though ^^

Yeeeeeeeeees, I even exchanged Dan's back for this *drool*

abitof_m0nkeys February 27 2011, 00:23:26 UTC

ohhhh. so sweet. "Will you tell me your name?" squeee. i love the idea of dan in a band. and of course martin would be his bandmate. love love love.

littlesumo February 27 2011, 00:30:03 UTC

Thank you :D

I purposefully left out which Martin ;) And I think Glen's in the band. And maybe Dirk. Not sure yet. And they're totally called "The Reds" ^^

abitof_m0nkeys February 27 2011, 15:50:02 UTC

hahahah OF COURSE that's the band! i gotta say, i definitely imagined a band!AU before and it definitely involved dan and martin... skrtel, that is. that's why i immediately assumed martin was martin skrtel, hahah.

abitof_m0nkeys February 27 2011, 15:50:39 UTC

oh and i forgot to say this, but Danny as your header. oh the freckles. ahfjwwedasj i'm squealing.

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weekendoffender February 27 2011, 02:22:46 UTC

Aaww, loved it! I was a bit hesitant to read it at first because of Fernando (yeah, I'm still not over it yet) but I'm so glad I did. It was so sexy & sweet & omg Martin & Danny in a band together! Omg this would be epic!

I'm so totally picturing it as Skrtel too ;) And Dirk would be the greatest drummer ever!

littlesumo February 27 2011, 10:06:14 UTC

Thank you for reading anyhow. Glad you liked it :)

OMG, Dirk as the drummer *lol*

narya86 February 27 2011, 10:16:24 UTC

Danny as a punk rocker, damn, I can so see that. ♥

Despite their argument that's mentioned at the beginning that's almost typical for such a scenario this whole thing somehow is so... romantic. I can't help myself. ^^ So sweet, and you can probably guess I'd LOVE a prequel to this! :D

littlesumo February 27 2011, 11:09:27 UTC

Me too ^^

Thank you :)
Yes, I can :D
(And did you notice Nando's hair colour? My Nando isn't usually blond ;) )

narya86 February 28 2011, 11:33:35 UTC

Blond Nando is the best Nando. ♥

tetila February 27 2011, 10:37:15 UTC

Of course they fall in love^^

Thank you, I love it ♥

Somehow I love the part where Dan's manager tells him fernando is not there. Makes it so much more real for me. If that makes sense...

ME WANTS THE PREQUEL!!

littlesumo February 27 2011, 11:10:26 UTC

Yeah, they cannot stay out of it :)

That's what counts :)

You'll get it. At some point. ;)