Trying hard to speak (B/J, QAF, Justin POV)

[freakykat]

Comments

[furriboots]

Wow. I finally got caught up on this fic of yours and it is so powerful. Not much does but you managed to bring me to tears with the heartache that each of them is suffering over their separation. It is like a part of each of them is ripped away when they are not together and the wound never heals.

I can't wait to read the next installment and please promise me that some happiness is on the way for both of them.

[freakykat]

Oh yay you read it Laurie! Thank you for the wonderful feedback. It has been extremely difficult for them to be apart and this particular part really showed how deeply they missed one another.

It is like a part of each of them is ripped away when they are not together and the wound never heals.

I think that really says it all. Great analysis.

I do promise some happiness for them. It'll be good.

[anonymous]

This is by far one of the best series that I think I have ever read in this fandom. Each chapter builds the story, but not too fast. When I see a new chapter posted, I am excited but also hesitant - because I know the feelings that will surface as I read. Right now they leave me with a physical ache in my heart, but I keep coming back for more, hoping that there will be happiness on the horizon.

I can always visualize them in my mind as I read - your descriptions filling my mind with images of how they would look and react at each moment. Excellent story, can't wait for the next chapter! Mika

[freakykat]

This is by far one of the best series that I think I have ever read in this fandom. Each chapter builds the story, but not too fast.

Oh thank you! That is just really a great compliment. I really hoped that the pacing for the series was good so yay! There's so much with them right now leading separate lives but still wanting to be together. I'm glad that's coming through.

I can always visualize them in my mind as I read - your descriptions filling my mind with images of how they would look and react at each moment. Excellent story, can't wait for the next chapter!

*blush* Aw...*sputters*

Thank you. *hugs*

[notreallyme10]

Beautiful. But you are killing me! I hate when they are apart, I can't wait for them to have some happier times in your story :)

[freakykat]

Beautiful. But you are killing me! I hate when they are apart, I can't wait for them to have some happier times in your story :)

Thank you! There will definitely be happier times going up. This part was the turning point and now they'll be drifting back together instead of apart. I think you'll enjoy on the upcoming parts where we see Justin first year in New York. B/J have really good moments.

Thanks for reading!

[anglluvr]

i love post-season 5 stories and this one is really good. i feel the angst. Only thing is, I've always fel its unfair that Justin gets to move on... new life, new lover and brian doesn't. While I wouldn't buy Brian falling in love again, I feel lik maybe he could meet a someone semi-special to pass time. I don't know... until his sunshine comes back....

[freakykat]

Thank you so much for reading and the lovely compliment!

While I wouldn't buy Brian falling in love again, I feel lik maybe he could meet a someone semi-special to pass time. I don't know... until his sunshine comes back....

You and I think ALOT alike lol...keep reading. I think you'll like some upcoming stuff.

[freakykat]

What wonderful feedback! Thank you. I love the hopeful note. Justin hasn't quite reached the conclusion he will eventually but at least he knows that what happened was important and that it changed everything.

Takes him a little longer to completely get it...but he will :)

Thank you for reading!