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Re: You made my heart hurt - damn you... freakykat June 6 2007, 05:45:39 UTC
Oh thank you so much. That's one of the nicest things anyone has ever said. There is definintely going to be more and I'll try some schmoopy later...or as schmoopy as they can be. :)

I friended you back!

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wouldbedorothy June 6 2007, 02:45:37 UTC
Well said, sheira!

Kat can seriously torture you, make you feel the pain so strong... and make you love her for it and ask for more.

So kinky, lol.

Beautiful story, of course! Love how you worked the bruise theme. And Take Me In is a song, thank you, just minus the music ;) Props should also go to my mother for sending the magnetic poetry kit. Those five words were my very first attempt.

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freakykat June 6 2007, 05:46:57 UTC
*drool* Lovely icon!

Thank you as always. Your song was quite inspiring! Yes, thanks to Mom too!

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snowmore June 7 2007, 00:48:48 UTC
Oh so lovely. A wonderful analogy - Brian's pain for the loss of Justin in his life, with a bruise so deep.
Quite stunning!

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freakykat June 9 2007, 04:10:40 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. I was surprised that it took the hopeful turn it did to be honest. More soon! Thank you again.

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herefordroad June 9 2007, 19:55:45 UTC
this was very, very painful (although well written!)...i need a happy sequel. i do like that ben is there for brian.

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freakykat June 10 2007, 00:37:48 UTC
Thank you for the feedback! It's a short series followed by a WIP...and I intend to make sure the boys get some happiness but it'll take time to get there. *grins* I promise...well at least I hope it'll be worth wait.

Ben fascinates me. His always has so I wanted to show how calm and sweet he can be. The next short is actually through his POV so it should be interesting. Thank you again.

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herefordroad June 10 2007, 04:11:06 UTC
i can go through any amount of pain and angst just knowing that our boys will find some happiness! i know it will be worth the wait. i like ben, too. always did and i will find his POV interesting.

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bostonkaty23 June 10 2007, 19:55:23 UTC
This was really good!

Thanks for sharing! :)

Katy

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freakykat June 10 2007, 20:33:32 UTC
Thank you so much! I love sharing!

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