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freakingkid

What Are You Afraid Of? 1.2

Jan 23, 2013 21:04

Title: What Are You Afraid Of?
Fandom: One Piece
Pairing: Zoro/Sanji
Rating: R
Word Count: 8,600
Summary: Sanji is a pirate; Zoro is a pirate hunter, but what should Sanji really be afraid of

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( “Why not?” Sanji asked. “You hunt pirates anyways, right?” )

sanji, one piece, zoro, zosan

Comments 7

narcisisticniny January 24 2013, 07:54:09 UTC

This is the best birthday present ever! I absolutely loved it. You are such a sweetie on the inside!!! Also, I know the whole battle between the spicy foods happened to you, and it's creepy how it fit into this story. XD

I just love how you entered so many interesting points into this story, such as their fears. The idea of this whole story revolving around their fears is pretty interesting, and I loved how you touched on Sanji being embarrassed to tell people he's gay, it's something that I have seen before in stories, but I wish it was done more often.

And their personalities were captured so well, even though they connected by confining in each other for all their personal stories and fears, they still had that bickering and competitive edge, which is the whole basis of their relationship in canon. Ah, I love your writing so much. THANK YOU!! :D
Also, happy birthday to you as well. I should write you something in return. :P

freakingkid January 30 2013, 08:40:22 UTC

..You obviously don't know me that well. Oh yeah, that. We still talk about that to this day. My stomach was on fire. Still is I think.

Thank you, but question, what is 'canon'???

And don't write me anything. You know how much I hate your writing. XD

narcisisticniny February 2 2013, 03:24:23 UTC

Don't worry about it hun.

Asshole. It'll be wonderful, I'll have you crying at how amazing it will be.

pngin_lvr January 25 2013, 01:25:25 UTC

That was so sweet it gave me cavities!!
And it was so well written!! I would give you a thought out review but I can't think!!

freakingkid January 30 2013, 08:42:01 UTC

The exclamation points were good enough I think.

pngin_lvr January 30 2013, 10:07:15 UTC

Good. I would hate being inadequate.

camouflagecat August 15 2013, 01:06:01 UTC

I really enjoyed this one. It's always interesting to read stories with these slightly altered universes, with Zoro still being a pirate hunter while the rest of the crew remains (and this was done well). Also I like how you portrayed their relationship and talking about their fears (the scene with them falling off the cliff was crazy but awesome). It almost ended too quickly and left me wanting for more, but perhaps a bit of a vague ending works in this case.

(also I have to admit the describing of Sanji's wanted poster has to be my favorite description of it so far- "it was like a before and after ad to keep kids off drugs." - why do I love that line so much? Lol)