WIP Amnesty: Revolution

[frausorge]

Yay wip_amnesty! Back in the green days of bunny-o-rama, there was a discussion of Dance Dance Revolution, and I wrote this bit. It's not incomplete, in the sense that I wasn't planning to add any more. It's just not, y'know, a finished piece. But fwiw, here you go.

Comments

[sinensiss]

this is really nice--I love those competitive JC moments of the opening. and Joey and JC always zing the strings of my heart.

[frausorge]

Thank you so much, Sinead! And I have to second what Maggie said below, that's a wonderful description of this pairing. I'm so glad this had something worth salvaging in your eyes!

[bossymarmalade]

oh, so nice! And I love what Sinead said, about how JC & Joey "zing the strings of [her] heart" -- that sort of slightly old-fashioned, dear sort of love is what I always associate with the pairing, and that totally comes through here. Plus, the individual reactions to Dance Dance? *Excellent*! I am glad that you posted this, liebling. ♥!

[frausorge]

Thank you very much, schatz! I'm so so happy there was something for you to enjoy in this. The catalogue-of-five device comes through again! hee. And yes, old-fashioned is the word indeed. I think Joey could be very good for JC, and JC for Joey, if they could work their way around to hooking up. ♥ ♥ right back atcha!

[remainthesame]

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! I think I saw a small part of this ages ago, and it's just as lovely now as it was then.

[frausorge]

Oh E, thank you! I think I did post an initial bit to the list at the time, and then I was trying to make it into a story, but it only ever got this far. But thank you for the kind words! You make everything brighter.

[rrrosa]

Yay wip amnesty--this was lovely!!

[frausorge]

Rosa! Thank you! I am very touched that you overcame your WIP-aversion to read this. Also, I adore that icon. And he's even talking about Joey's wounded leg in that interview, right? iirc. ♥

[rrrosa]

a) at least with WIP-amnesty, I pretty much *know* it's not going to be finished

b) this didn't feel unfinished in the least

c) I love your writing!!, and

d) yes, he's talking about Joey's leg. Eeeeee. I'm having a wee resurgence of sparkly love recently.

[frausorge]

Aw, doll, you are too too kind to me! And, I fully support the resurgence of sparkliness. Shiny! twirly! sparkly! boys! (and girls!) With the sexy touching! There is so much to love. Also I cannot wait until JC's album comes out.