Comments | fraser_vecchio: "Cataloging," for china

spuffyduds in fraser_vecchio

"Cataloging," for china_shop

Apr 03, 2008 02:16

Title: Cataloging
Author: spuffyduds
Recipient: china shop
Pairing & Rating: Fraser/Vecchio; R
Word count: 1650
Disclaimer: Not in any way mine, these guys.
Author's Notes: Set early season two. China wanted slash, first-time kissing or sex, Fraser gives Ray a weird present.

( Cataloging )

Comments 58

snoopypez April 3 2008, 07:13:55 UTC

!!!!

There is SO not enough F/V from Fraser's POV, I feel. Not awesomely written like THIS, anyway. I love how Fraser attempts to fall asleep; I should try that. And hopefully not be sidetracked. ;P

Because he always knew Ray was--demonstrative, tactile, enviably at ease with touch; but he never realized how constantly, thoroughly Ray touches every. Damned. Thing.
HEART. And jealous over it? EVEN MORE HEART.

“It is in Canada,” Fraser lies cheerfully, startling himself. “It’s, ah, Diefenbaker Day. The prime minister,” he clarifies, glaring at Dief, who is looking hopefully up from behind Ray’s desk.
A LIE. Tsk. ;) And also, awww, Dief. :D

“Would you,” Fraser says. “Would you please. Now?”
Whimper.

Dief's encouragement and Fraser's being oddly moved by it makes me happy. :D

He steps up to Ray and slowly, carefully strips the gloves off, puts them in Ray’s coat pockets. His own hands are trembling slightly, and Ray leans silently back against the door and just watches him, lets him do what he’s doing.Again: whimper. See also: swoon ( ... )

spuffyduds April 4 2008, 20:47:56 UTC

Fraser POV is odd to work with, but fun. Not as--sparkly and jagged as either Ray, but nifty to get to play with the vocabulary level and the allusiveness, y'know? So glad you liked! And whimpered! ;-)

china_shop April 3 2008, 07:41:12 UTC

(He smiles into the darkness as he realizes that all his tastes of today were actually food. He’ll have to mention that to Ray tomorrow. Ray will be loudly, charmingly disbelieving.)

Awwwwww! *flails* And and and! OMG, you had me holding my breath at the end there, and now I'm all sniffly, and my heart is full, and oh! Oh Fraser! This is just fabulous! I LOVE IT! Thank you, thank you, thank you!!! ♥♥♥

spuffyduds April 4 2008, 20:48:53 UTC

Oh HUZZAH! Man, I am so glad you liked this. I was kind of freaking out, because, aiee, it's YOU. Thank you VERY much!

aingeal8c April 3 2008, 08:15:18 UTC

Awwww lovely Fraser POV. I can just see him doing that. And yay realisation.

Very nice. :-)

spuffyduds April 4 2008, 20:49:23 UTC

Thank you! Fraser has a fun brain to play with.

aingeal8c April 4 2008, 21:37:57 UTC

And now I picturing you with Fraser's brain playing catch...

spuffyduds April 4 2008, 21:44:05 UTC

You really don't want to miss.

*SPLORTCH!*

"Oh dear."

Thread 5

jenoofer April 3 2008, 10:34:35 UTC

This made me smile - just about the daftest smile imaginable. Lovely story.

spuffyduds April 4 2008, 20:50:12 UTC

Y'know, "daft" is such a great word and it just doesn't get used enough. Hee! Thanks for liking, and being daftinated.

nakeisha April 3 2008, 14:21:46 UTC

Your choice of POV for this really worked so very well.

Very nice.

spuffyduds April 4 2008, 20:51:02 UTC

Thank you! I originally had it in my head from Ray's POV and it was bouncing around and not cooperating, and the second Fraser started talking instead it got much easier. Brains, they are weird.