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franlex

Sacrifice

Mar 21, 2009 16:49

Title: Sacrifice, Complete
Rating: R
Fandom: Smallville
Pairing: Clex
Words: 14.687
Summary: What did Clark do that summer in the city under the influence of the Red!K? What kind of enemies did he make? What if one of those enemies tracked him down to his home and threatened his family?
Author's Notes: Repost of the first part, beta'd this time ( Read more... )

fic, sacrifice, smallville, clex

Comments 12

enderwiggin24 March 21 2009, 23:53:37 UTC

wow, that was fast update!
I really like jonathan here, though I must say, the end felt a bit rushed!
but happy end is good :D

franlex March 22 2009, 00:01:15 UTC

Thanks for the comment, really. I also felt the end a bit rushed, but I didn't know how else to end it, so... I just did. I guess it needed more thought.

:)

writingandlove March 22 2009, 00:23:54 UTC

Loved your story.

franlex March 22 2009, 19:55:48 UTC

Thank you!!

roxymissrose March 22 2009, 01:31:07 UTC

I'm a fan of RedKClark stories, while he's on it, or dealing with the fallout of it. Nice way to handle that! I'm with Ender--it zipped to a conclusion, I'd have loved a bit more.

franlex March 22 2009, 19:57:28 UTC

*sighs*

Yeah, the more I think about it, the more I want to hit myself over the head for rushing it. Promise not to do it again!

Thanks for commenting!

twinsarein March 22 2009, 03:23:45 UTC

Yay! No more secrets. I always like it when the boys are honest with each other. I too think that Lex would react much better than Pete did. And Jonathan came around - super!

franlex March 22 2009, 19:59:37 UTC

Hey, what a sexy icon you got there! Yum!

Thanks for the feedback. I do love it when the boys are honest with each other and I just *know* Lex would have reacted much better than Pete did. And Jonathan. My Jonathan likes Lex, deep inside.

*GRIN*

eternal_moonie March 22 2009, 14:35:24 UTC

I love it! That was awesome!

franlex March 22 2009, 20:00:13 UTC

Thanks man, really means a lot to me!