Comments | frankxdwayne: Fic: VALENTINE'S DAY IS FOR LOSERS

morelen in frankxdwayne

Fic: VALENTINE'S DAY IS FOR LOSERS

Feb 13, 2011 23:58

Title: VALENTINE'S DAY IS FOR LOVSERS
Pairing: Frank/Dwayne
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Besides the usual (underage, incest, language, bottom!Dwayne), underage drinking, angst, LOTS of schmoop and romance (don't say you weren't warned!)
Summary: Valentine's Day, Frank/Dwayne-style
Disclaimer: LMS is not mine

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rating: nc-17, fanfiction

Comments 7

leftofield February 15 2011, 04:37:47 UTC

Ahhh, this was amazing.

I know I've said it in the past but embarrassed!Dwayne is my absolute favorite and you did him perfectly. Especially in this line: "M-me?" he blurts out meekly. GUH. I DIED.

And then,

There is still nothing that excites him more than when Frank is this seductively forward.

YOU AND ME BOTH, DWAYNE. YOU AND ME BOTH.

I think this is one of my favorite fics of yours because of the tenderness it shows between them and just how far they've come. And it also incorporates my favorite aspects of this pairing from how they tease each other to references to each others past experiences/age. Also the pronier bits were very subtle which fit the overall feeling of the fic, I felt like. I loved it <3

morelen February 15 2011, 04:49:05 UTC

Thanks so much! :D I'm so happy right now and so glad you liked it! Thanks for appreciating all the little details and stuff. I do my best to get them just right. <333

leftofield February 15 2011, 04:51:44 UTC

You're very welcome <3 And it definitely shows how are you work! Like honestly, I know sometimes it can seem like people are just saying stuff because it's nice or whatever but I'm picky with fic XD If I don't like it, I'll stop reading and I've never done that with a single one of your fics.

Also, Happy Valentine's Day! I hope you spent it like me, single and eating A TON of chocolate and sweets :D

morelen February 15 2011, 05:16:00 UTC

AWWWW :') Thank you again! That means so much to me. There's no worse writing crime than being boring, at least to me. And happy V-Day to you, too! <3

klair716 February 20 2011, 04:50:18 UTC

Wonderful, as usual, and a good deepening of their relationship.

morelen February 20 2011, 05:03:30 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad You liked it and that you noticed that. It's very much appreciated. <3

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morelen February 20 2011, 21:58:58 UTC

Would you believe I just woke up like half an hour ago? I feel like crap but this was a wonderful thing to wake up to. :) So, now that I've had my afternoon-breakfast coffee, thanks, babe. I'm so happy to know that you liked it. It means the world to me. <3