Fic: Unintended

[morelen]

Title: Unintended
Pairing: Frank/Dwayne
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Underage, incest, language, bottom!Dwayne, first-time TOP!DWAYNE (expect awkwardness). Long fic is long (~7500 words). Un-beta'd (I didn't want to bug anyone this month).
Summary: Frank hates his birthday, but Dwayne intends to fix that and then ends up doing more than he bargained for

Comments

[morelen]

asdfghsfjklsdgl OMG I'm gonna cry. I'm serious. I'm so happy and emotional right now that I'm literally shaking. Thank you so, so much. ♥

[leftofield]

I have to agree with the first commenter and say I think this is my favorite. It's just so sweet :) It also felt incredibly real. Like, obviously Dwayne is like the definition of a power bottom (I love that phrase lol) and to see the role reversal I'm so glad you made it awkward and not so perfect, like with Dwayne coming first. I know it's porn but it's like, rolled up in so much emotion, for me at least.

Also, I love "protégé means protected" <3

And this just did it for me: “I’m so glad it was you.”
Like, LFKSHFLKHSLKFHLKSHF DWAYNE STOP BEING SO ADORABLE AND HEARTBREAKING!!

Frank is also my favorite person ever <3

This is going straight into my mems, bb :)

[morelen]

OMG I'm gonna cry again! Not even kidding! It makes me happy beyond words to hear this. I'd been wanting to write them doing this for a while and I was slowly putting it all together in my head. I knew it had to be a "special" moment between them that was about a lot more than just sex/porn. I was pretty nervous myself writing it, lol, so to know that I did what I set out to do means SO MUCH. Thank you!! <3

[klair716]

I love you for loving Muse, and I love you for loving these guys, and I love you for a writing this amazingly beautiful story that was just so THEM. It may be a bit weird/silly, seeing as I don't actually know you, but SO MUCH LOVE! ♥

[morelen]

LOL it's OK! :D I love you for reading and liking this so much! Believe me, your enthusiasm is VERY much appreciated. Thank you! ♥

[tju_tju_tju_tju]

aaaaaaah Dude, this is SO GOOD! It is so very, very, very good. I AM SIMULTANEOUSLY AROUSED AND DISTURBED

But seriously, though, I really think that probably the best part of this was just the closeness these two share, and the bond that they have. You really got that across extremely well here. I also thought the first scene could've come right out of the movie, hahahaha. EXCELLENT JOB, MY FRIEND.

[morelen]

I can't begin to tell you how happy you've made me, but I'll try even though my eyes are welling up. For one, coming from you, that means A LOT. And second, to hear that from someone outside the fandom who was a little bit apprehensive about the content means even more. Thank you. Thank you so much. You know how tough things have been for me lately, so I really needed to hear something good.

[tju_tju_tju_tju]

<3

[sgmystikspiral]

WOW, you know I would go so far as to call this the perfect story. If the fandom was to end tomorrow (let's hope it doesn't.. I'm still hanging in there!) but if it should and this was the last story ever written for it... that would be ok.

I feel like this would sway even a skeptic. It is written with such care and attention to detail that I almost felt guilty peeking into their lives. It's the story I would rec new members of fandom to ensure they "understand the ship" and inspire them to get invloved.

Not to mention... love scenes were pretty hot (and at the same time realistic)! ^_~

[morelen]

I am literally crying right now. I can't even describe how happy you've made me. It's rare that I actually feel this proud about something I've written and comments like that make it happen. Things have been so rough for me lately. I felt like I was failing at everything, so I really, really needed to hear something like this. I already feel better and as though I can face all the things ahead of me head-on now. Thank you so much. This means so much to me. I'm glad to know I'm doing something that makes others happy as opposed to how useless and wretched I've been feeling lately. <333

[sgmystikspiral]

I am so sorry things have been bad recently, we've all been there (my life is more similar to yours than you know). I am so glad I was able to brighten your day with this simple gesture. I am pretty shit at being timely but feel free to bother me. And you can NEVER fail at creativity... as long as your creation comes from love it will always be beautiful.

[morelen]

I've been meaning to reply to this second comment, but whenever I read the last sentence, I start to cry and I have to stop. Even now. But I'm making myself do it because I owe you another thank you. So, thank you so much again. <3

If you want to talk to me for any reason I can give you my AIM or MSN names in a PM.

btw, there's a new fic up. It's a little on the lighter side. Too much angst for me lately.